I think I really like this design, but would you try introducing more space between the text and the lines. I feel it needs more visual spacing. I would also like to see the text in bold, to see if we can make it "pop" a little more. My eyes are so heavily drawn to the center.
Although similar in concept, it doesn't feel as much like a leaf. Almost like a fish or whale... Odd I know. Sticking with this concept, could you do something similar with a flower?
Thank you for your submissions. This one is my favorite thus far. I would be interested in seeing some different leaf designs, including possibly a maple leaf (Canadian reference). as an example.
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I will immediately make revisions
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Whatever input you provide will be very helpful in producing a design according to your wishes
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please tell me
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I have submitted several design revisions.
please check.
Greetings
rrkina
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I have submitted several design revisions.
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Greetings
rrkina
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