Wow, I like your idea! There is one thing that is holding it back from #1 - can you add some dimension to it? For instance, in #1, There is a glossy effect implying the logo is an object as opposed to flat. If you can take your concept and somehow add that idea as well, I think this will be our new favorite! This one got us excited - thanks for your efforts!
I like the update!! We had an idea though - we were picturing the "glow" more like "rays" coming out of the screen... Also, the bird is not needed being that there is a reference to the laptop being the "L" of Lazarus. Also, maybe more depth to the logo? Perhaps a drop shadow on the logo/business name and "radiant glow" background scheme? What do you think?