One more thing, after making the change just requested, please redo the new #43 and redo #42 with the club to the left with the club under Laughing (proportional so that it looks good)
One more request. Could you please start with #68, but use the inner grey part of #67 (the inner part of the smile) and put the grey inner part in the darker club of #68. We think this will call out the smile a little more.
#110 is not the change I was looking for. The grey would almost look like lips within the darker club in #68. The grey section of the club would be a recessed portion of the club head all while still having the white (no change to the white area). We are thinking this grey area will call out the smile more.
#110 is not the change I was looking for. The grey would almost look like lips within the darker club in #68. The grey section of the club would be a recessed portion of the club head all while still having the white (no change to the white area). We are thinking this grey area will call out the smile more.
#123 is my attempt at incorporating the second grey. It really does need to be in the style of lips to work. I did try other ways but they looked like lips anyway, but not in a good way. #124 is a version with a wider mouth but no second grey.
OK, thanks for the update (hope you had a safe flight). We have a couple more updates to request. Use design #123, but add the hozel (the green added to the golf shaft) from #143 to #123. After this update is made: create versions of this (the new #123) in GREEN again, Red, Royal Blue, Orange and Yellow.
I hope you made it safely to your international destination? Please give a status update as to whether or not you can commit to the logo updates. If not, let us know when you will be able to perform these updates.
I've safely arrived thank you, and fully set up online now so I'm able to get moving on the updates (which sound good!). I'll be a couple of hours from posting this message.
Just uploaded these new colours — a couple of extras: With the royal blue the smile side 'crease' was completely lost in the background so I made that the lighter grey. I have also done an additional lighter blue version as an option (blue in the smile crease).
Red got a bit lost in the grey too so I've done a secondary version with the grey crease.
Excellent looking revisions to the logo. I have several other partners, but I think the updates you just made lock up the logo design to a just about done if not completely done logo design.
I really like where this logo landed in terms of how it looks.
Thank you once again for your hard work and accommodating us even after 12 hours of international travel.
If you need anything else please just post it here. I'm not online quite as much as usual at present but shouldn't be more than a few hours between checking in.