Thank you for your latest #58 entry. I like this structure much better than #46. I would like the tagline to be done in black and the "Rise.Evolve.Succeed" in pink letters. Right now in gray that seems separated from the rest and not strong.
Here is some feedback from a member of our target audience regarding the main LSN logo you created for #46, which you also used for #58.
"Whimsical, curvy and soft. Lacks strength and boldness. Evokes feelings of uncertainty and gentleness vs. fierceness. It needs power and confidence!"