No worries. You know I take plenty of time to review things.This being my second time of using this, I am much better engaged at it than before.
Great job on the designs.
I like #29, but can you take off the black background, so it stands on it's own. I think it's too dark and I do not want to showcase a box within a box. Does this make sense?
#31 is being reviewed by my business partners. I'll give you feedback on that later.
#30 can we make the background in the box black and the LSN letters can be in black and you can still leave the middle part in white? Also, I think there are too many stars. Maybe take the one off from inside the box? I think the cursive is too overly fancy. Can we make it more simple?
The updates to 41 are great. Let's see what the ladies say.
There is something that is disconnected with #40. The image looks like it should be more cohesive. Maybe because it does not appear as an actual square. What do you think?
#31 - Can you use the font you used inside the flower for the word Latina. With the flower it is feminine enough, but too much cursive will not appeal to the professionals. This community will be made of professional and entrepreneur women and those who are in between. Latina Success Network should stand out, just like it does in the #1 ranked logo and not just the word Latina. Otherwise, then we will be competing for everything else out there that has "Latina" in it. Also the tagline is too small. Maybe the tagline can take up the span of the entire logo?
#41 and #42 - Take out the "L" from the box. What should stand out in the box is "LSN." Get rid of the cursive and make it more modern or to match the LSN. Can we have a little more pink in both of the boxes, since we are looking at merchadizing and we would like for it to stand out on it's own an represent the colors.
#43 - Similar. Get rid of the cursive, which makes it not professional enough and is there a way to incorporate LSN?
I ranked #62 and #56. They are good because Latina Success Network is emphasized together as opposed to just the word "Latina", but the designs are still not quite right. The feedback is that they look too blocky.
Here is some feedback on #48:
"The word “Latina”, is overpowering and muddies the overall message. The flower symbol is strongly feminine, which seems to target a specific type of woman vs. being inclusive. It could depict a sense of immaturity, preventing LSN from portraying itself as a serious, professional network. On the other hand, it does capture a cultural element often found in Latino folk art."
Here is feedback on #49:
"Provides a serious professional undertone with its block and under score graphical design. However, the black and bolder pink color scheme resembles a common sorority branding style. Once again, we see the word “Latina”, serving as the central focus point taking away from the slogan and acronym."
I just set #56 to rank 5 so you can make changes. I will do the same for 62 once you are done with #56. Can you make the letters in #56 less blocky and softer like in #62?
#131 - Can you make the circle for the flower larger? People are saying it's too small. Also, if we use this for merchandizing, we want to make sure the LSN stands out. Can the pink letters for "Rise...." be made darker?