Cool design. I like the border design, but worry that it detracts from the text of the logo. Could you build around this and try to do some new ideas with text that stands out a bit more?
I really like what you're doing with #57 and #58. Can you play around with some border designs and some different fonts? Overall, this is going in a good direction.
I still really like #58. Can you try some designs with the inner black space (inside the border) that uses some different patterns and different colors?
Can you try some designs like #58, but with the following?
- Try different borders - Instead of a solid interior dark space, try using some different patterns (i.e. stripes, argyle, checkered, etc.) and different colors? - Play around with some different fonts