Hi sorry, it is a bit shorter than entry #285, i make the "asphalt supply co" and it's box shorter to make same length to "LETHBRIDGE"
However i make 3 layout showing 3 possible ways to make this same overall size as of entry #285.. Please look on entry #287 , #289 , #290 .. and there explanation.
On entry #285, without making the "LETHBRIDGE" bigger, i only put a spacing between letters on "LETHBRIDGE" so then they will be same length on "asphalt supply co".. And this is the result
On entry #285, to balance the length of "LETHBRIDGE" to "asphalt supply co", i adjusted the "LETHBRIDGE" bigger same length to "asphalt supply co". .. and this is the result
Looks nice . Can you please change the bottom of the shield back to blue. Can you also run a thin black "box" around the entire "lethbridge asphalt supply co" lettering ? Perhaps make the "lethbridge" a bit smaller/shorter, and run the thin black box line past in while keeping it in line with the black border below .
Hope that makes sense. If not, I can post a hand sketch to try and explain it . Let me know if you need a better explanation.
Can you make the "asphalt supply co" lettering black , and create the box around it with a thin black line ? If that isn't clear enough to understand let me know and I'll try to re-word the request . Thanks
Hi, update is on entry #273 and also i made a reverse colored box on my entry #275 which is now on a black box but this time i adjust he blue to a little lighter blue.
please remove green maple leaf and add the red maple leaf to the top of the crest .
Please make the box surrounding "asphalt supply co" deeper/thicker (move bottom of box down) and change the lettering colour inside this box to black . keep all the other colours the same .Thanks
i make "co" smaller so asphalt will close size to LETHBRIDGE. Please let me know if we need to adjust it more, and does the shade of blue i pick is ok? or need dark blue or whatever.
To make the "asphalt supply co" close size to LETHBRIDGE i put a small gap between LETHBRIDGE and make the "co" in smaller so "asphalt supply" stand out also
Base on your comment on entry #244 this is what i come up and hope i get what you mean. To make the LETHBRIDGE smaller but balance to asphalt supply co. i made it with a gap each letter on LETHBRIDGE. I try it also on blue but dont know if you are ok with my blue shade choice. :)
1- remove the maple leaf entirely, and change everything currently in green , to blue.
2- Remove the maple leaf . Make the box surrounding "asphalt supply co" thicker (leave top at same elevation and move the box down so that it pushes the 'lasco " lower. Make the "asphalt supply co" a thicker font , and also please try it in black (hopefully we can make it stand out more, so that it is not overwhelmed by the 'lethbridge"
Can you please make the skyline look like a smaller city ? Lethbridge isnt a huge centre and we dont want to look like we are representing a large centre . Can you also make the size of font for" Lethbridge asphalt supply co" as close to the same as possible ?
Hi. thanks for your feedback again. Please check updates on entry #243 and #244. I agree with your feedback and it looks more better than previous. If you have other request please let me know, i am willing until you satisfied on the logo.
After seeing the larger shield we are leaning towards the original shield . Can you make the box around the lettering really thin , the same as the line thickness that is currently on both sides of LASCO . Also please try removing the green maple leaf , and adding a larger maple leaf above and slightly behind the top of the crest (similar to the design of the Edmonton FC crest image that we added) . Can you also try making the lettering of Lethbridge asphalt supply Co closer to the same size . "Lethbridge" can remain a bit bigger if needed to make it fit
Can you please try making the "shield" larger, as well as making the radius at the top shallower and the point at the bottom less sharp. Can you also try placing all the script inside a box by continuing the thin line on each side of LASCO ? Thanks
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Thanks for your hard work . It's been a pleasure working with you !
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However i make 3 layout showing 3 possible ways to make this same overall size as of entry #285.. Please look on entry #287 , #289 , #290 .. and there explanation.
Many thanks again for your feedback!
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It looks like the overall length of the lettering is shorter than that of # 285
is it the same length ,or is it just the box around # 285 that makes it longer ?
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1- can we make the blue shield a bit larger , without changing the style of shield ?
2- can we try replacing the shield with a blue circle ?
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Hope that makes sense. If not, I can post a hand sketch to try and explain it . Let me know if you need a better explanation.
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Let me know if i made the right thing you have requested or if you have other suggestion please let me know.
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Lets also try adding the large red maple leaf at the top ,and changing the colour of the letters inside the banner to black .
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Please make the box surrounding "asphalt supply co" deeper/thicker (move bottom of box down) and change the lettering colour inside this box to black . keep all the other colours the same .Thanks
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Can we try several things
1- remove the maple leaf entirely, and change everything currently in green , to blue.
2- Remove the maple leaf . Make the box surrounding "asphalt supply co" thicker (leave top at same elevation and move the box down so that it pushes the 'lasco " lower. Make the "asphalt supply co" a thicker font , and also please try it in black (hopefully we can make it stand out more, so that it is not overwhelmed by the 'lethbridge"
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Can you also make the 'Lethbridge" smaller , as well as trying the maple leaf in red or black ?
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