Thank you for the submission. I believe you are gong for a slot machine idea. Not bad, but needs further development to be considered.
I would like to see some color added to it, as well as the graphic to be clean and more to it.
I do not want to completely throw out the idea; however, I do not want to waste your time either. Other than saying "Las Vegas Golf Map", at first glance the graphic does not portray Las Vegas or Golf Map. My business partner didn't know what it was, until I told him I thought it was supposed to be the reels of a slot machine. That said, it may take a lot more detail to portray what we are trying to say with our logo.
We hope you continue with submissions, and try out other ideas as well.
Thank you for the entries. I think these #10, #12, #13 are pretty rough, and not exactly going the direction we are looking for at this point.
I looked through your portfolio, and I saw the currently ranked number 2 for Magnolia Emporium. I like the method used to create the magnolia (flower), and think something like that to create an old school looking pirate map incorporating a golf hole or aerial course map might be a nice touch.
Just an idea; however, feel free to use your creativity.
Thank you for the update. We really like the direction of #25, and we would like to see the idea developed further. Maybe we could tone down the freeways a little, as well as, some of the random markings, and add some more detail to the map to show some hotels and downtown detail.
It is definitley a great start, and we hope to see more development to it.