Very nice idea. Could you add some more colors or change them to brighten the look? Perhaps green and bronze / brown. Also, there is a great deal of white space - perhaps a background color with more bold lettering with color contrasts? Thanks for your effort and look forward to seeing if you can alter it some.
I like this one better. Could you have the background color fade in or out to be different shades of the basic color used ? Also, could you show it in another color, like green or blue just to get an idea of what it would look like? Thank you so much in advance for your work and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
On design #15,nice changes with different colors. Could you make some adjustments just to compare - could the Larry Young be either slightly larger or more bold or noticed if the color was slightly different.could you show it as well in a green background .
Design #15 - another nice design - would like to see different colors as well to get an idea how it would present.You might try a blue or green or ligh brown background with contrasting letters -like the curved line under the name Larry (possibly could suggest a mouth) and the bold but smaller dental - just color variations on this would be great Design #13 - try a little lighter shade or go to green or brown background with larger letters for Larry Young and smaller but bolder letters for dental.
Overall - nice job and nice changes so far - I am appreciative of your work.
Entry #13, I like the font the best here. I would rather see a gold/brown background than the red. We want bronze/gold/brown, not red/garnet. I was not thinking abstract smile with the logo contest, but this logo is growing on me. Perhaps you can take the font and colors and think of some other idea than the smile abstract in addition to what you have? Perhaps LYD initials in an elegant way? Thanks again!
On logo #17, could you make the letters similar in size to your logo #15?Also add one space between LarryYoung. Nice job again - thanks so much.
On logos #19 and #20 - both are nice - again add a space between LarryYoung and could it be slightly less dark background - I like the color - perhaps a little less dark. Nice work - thanks.
Entry #28: can you change the Dental font on the second line to be a little thinner and space the letters out a little more? Want to see how that looks. thanks
Nice designs - many are similar with slilght changes in the font and size of the letters and spacing.Though I like the brown/bronze/ gold look, could you show a few different color combinations with #89,#39 and #94 to get an idea of what it would look like with some other colors - thanks in advance.