Lanin Law P.C.Logo Design Contest

Hi.
You can leave messages here for me referencing particular designs; it is less confusing for the designers.

thanks, these are very interesting
the caricature is very good too - altho I don't always keep the beard, so I'd have to think about whether I want to make that part of the logo

I like your ideas

some comments -

#31 might be too much to repeat the word Law 3x
I'd be curious to try "It's our middle name" instead as the tag line

also curious if you have any way to use the word law only once - so that the same 3 letters are part of my personal name and part of the firm name - to sort of connect them, almost like a crossword puzzle or with a watermark maybe

I think the skyline only works well when it is full length, the smaller skyline is harder to discern

Regards,

Scott



Regards,

Scott

some thoughts -

#30, maybe add after ny name -

Attorney
NY Attorney
Esq.
or a bullet and then Experienced
or bullet and Experience NY Attorney

not sure how spacing will work to keep it balanced

#40 wondering how bottom tag would look in different font like arial, script, handwriting, or all lower case

#38 is sort of what I had in mind but it's off-balance
I prefer symmetry and balance - which goes with my type of work and personality
but you're on the right track
I wonder if you can do lettering which overlaps or letters that cut into other letters (for example see #35, which I like, but which does not work because it minimized the key word (Law) too much)

thanks

Scott

#40
could you try this one in some variations?

one without the tag line at all

and then one version with this tag - "experienced new york attorney"

and one version with this tag - "foreclosure * bankruptcy * business litigation"
(you can use any kind of bullet instead of asterisk there)

please try tags all the way across the bottom full justify, not just to the right

tags might look nice in all lower case, not sure til I see
longer tag might need a horizontal line to separate it from the firm name

thanks for your creativity

Scott

#43 is a bit too dark
reminds me of Gotham City in Batman
we need to keep manhattan cheery
either light grey (enough to be seen) or just the outline, which may be best

thanks

#43 also I don't like the script font after all on the tag
if I'm going to go with more things happening in the logo
it will probably look better w more uniform or simpler fonts so that it is not too busy

wow you have some quick turnaround!
could you try #46 without my personal name at all

and with my personal name on the left only
I think it's too crowded looking w my personal name centered on top
tx

#46 also curious to see that tag in all caps, with the small font size you're using, full justify
tx

#40 could you try the tag line on this one in all lower case also for comparison? like the way you did #44

thanks

Scott