Greetings! Hope you like these initial concepts. My apologies, I realize that I miss-typed your slogan. Rather than pull them straight away I'd like to get your thoughts and then re-submit accordingly. I always welcome feedback - thank you!
Thank you for the ranking. Is there any feedback that you'd like to give me? Perhaps there is some way that I can improve on this design for you. Please let me know, I'm all ears!