Land of Little Horses Performing Animals Theme ParkLogo Design Contest

Here is the revision sir, and also with monochrome black

TY! I was able to share with my staff last night and here are some new tweaks:
-can you adjust the font so that the word Land doesn't look like the word Lard?
-Can you make the horse on the right more comparable in size to the one on the left - you may also consider smaller features on the legs, muzzle, and neck (indicating a smaller horse)?
-put the boys hand in back of the unicorn like the girls is on the horse
-if we need to use this in black/white, will that be effective as well?
Thank you! We are so close!

hello, here is with two white horses

hello, here is with two white horses

This is great! Can I see it with a while unicorn too?

Let me try to incorporate boy, and or try gender neutral child looking

TY! What would you suggest if we wanted something a little more gender neutral? I'd like to appeal to all kids and their families. Any thoughts?

Here is with smaller Horses

Here is with bigger child

Can you make either the girl a little bigger or the horses a little smaller?

This looks nice. TY!

Here is the revision

We're wondering what it would look like if the one she is petting didn't have the unicorn horn? Let's also take the s off of the word animals. Can you make the large star a little smaller to blend better with the others? I'm undecided right now about the colors. I need to think a little more about those.

Here is new one, with more prominent on text and horses. About the color, is it need more vibrant? Please advice, Thank You

it's better. TY

Is this to curly?

getting closer. Let's make the font a little less curly que. Let's take out the other animals and move the girl and unicorn over a little and see if there is room for another small horse on the other side. TY

ah, i see

Getting closer. The focus on the words should be on Little Horses and not Land

Hello, thank you for the feedback. Has submit new design, is it on the right track?

TY! Cute, but looks a little dated in design. I like the interaction with the child and if that can show that the horses are miniature instead of larger, that might be attractive and helpful.