Lake EyesLogo Design Contest

Love this design. Could you make the by-line a little bit larger and still get it to fit? You might even shorten the by-line to "Keeping an eye on your lake property".

Hi Sir David, thanks for the feedback, will update my entry now.. Cheers!

Best Regards,
Ponetz

update 1.. tagline adjusted.. Cheers!

(This comment references Entry #7)

update 2..

(This comment references Entry #8)

Very nice. I like this a lot. There is one small but important correction, that is changing the word "and" to AN. Should read, KEEPING AN EYE ON YOUR LAKE PROPERTY.

woops.. sorry for the typo Sir.. Here you go.. Cheers!

(This comment references Entry #11)

Hi Sir, here's an update of my logo.. I've changed the font to a more masculine feel to balance it to my design.

(This comment references Entry #24)

Thank you so much for contributing to the design competition. I especially was drawn to # 11. You are an excellent designer/developer and while I didn't wind up choosing one of your designs I appreciate your talent, skills and responsiveness. Thank you.