Lady of the Sea AdventuresLogo Design Contest

Thanks for making the change and giving us different variations. We prefer this #148 the best. Thanks!

We are getting more feedback. Can you apply the same font to logo 126 as you did for #143, can you also apply the same blue including shading to the tail. And can you give us a version with and without lines bordering "Adventures"? Thank You

Thanks for all the different variations. Our favorite is #143. For this one (126), can you lighten up the tail just a bit more (similar to 143)? Thanks

Changes uploaded ..let me know if there is something wrong.

Best Regards,
Dalhaz

This is the size and shading of the mermaid that we want. What we would like to see is the "of the" both in a smaller font with "the" not in caps.

We just got more feedback from from our review board. Please make "of and the" same size and smaller than Lady/Sea and remove the capital T from "the". We like to maintain the same length of the verbiage as compare to mermaid otherwise the mermaid will dominate the verbiage. We want the verbiage to stand out more than the mermaid at first glance. Thanks

changes have been uploaded.
please feel free if you need revision/something else.

Best Regards,
Dalhaz

Thanks, can you lighten the fins a little more like you did on the blue and do the same for your round version #126? Once received we will send our top 5 logos with 3 of them being yours to our review board for a final decision. Thanks

Thanks for changing the tail, could you apply this tail to #117, leaving the colors the same as they are at this time on #117. Thank You.

Thanks for all the changes, but we don't like the rainbow effect, so let's just stay with solid color tails, using shading to get the desired effect. We like the added arm. Could you please add this to #115, which is our current 1st pick. We also like to see a second copy with the tail color from #117, which is a little more green. Leave hair color like it is currently on #115, the yellow/orange ends look too much like fire. Thanks

We are getting more feedback from friends and they suggest to warm up the color palate on the hair and tail rather than having cool tones. Thanks

Can you put the same tail as #115 on this mermaid. All else is great. Thanks

Can you put her left arm back with the hand on the "S". Everything else looks great, great colors!

We are going to put this logo back in the competition as well, but like to ask you to tone it down a bit like the other, like to retain both arms but take the fire look out of the hair a bit. Would also like to see a bit more detail on the tail. Thanks

.... but we like to see the rainbow colors go to more dark blue/turquoise before we show it to them. Thanks

We are keeping this logo in the competition and will ask for feedback from our friends and business associates.

One of the nicest one we've see in the competition, but at this point, we like to stay with your 2 other versions (56 and 103) as they are very unique in their design

good morning. nice changes, but a bit too rainbow color. Could you go to a darker blue/turquoise for the body and tail no purple. we like what you did with the hair, can you go back to the original red color. Star fish is nice but would like it to be pointy rather than rounded on the ends. Would like some fin rays on the tail. Adventures back to red.
could you also go back to the original and put the new tamed down hair on it (we like to see the logo #56 with the new hair) Thanks!

new update uploaded #102
let me know if there is something wrong/missing something.

Best Regards,
Dalhaz

You were our number one, but after asking multiple friends, they think your logo is too biker style and does not have enough warm feeling.... Can you soften it up a bit and make her more inviting. We really like your style, but also listen to the crowd. Our 20 year old's love it, but the older crowd (with money, who would pay for a cruise, prefer a different logo at this time, which is more colorful and warm).

Changes uploaded #73

Could you give us this version with her mouth closed? Thanks!

Thanks, we like both, the gray/gray and the gray/black. Will think about it more....

Changes uploaded ..if you need revision/something else, just let me know...I am ready for anything.
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Best Regards,
Dalhaz

Could you change "Lady of the Sea" to black instead of grey but leave the Mermaid with the current color? Thanks
We just noticed that the mermaid is a bit shorter in this version. Looking good. Thanks

Thank you. We have you in first position but there are some runner ups. at this point we don't see anything else we would like changed. if you feel like making some modifications please feel free as we love what you have done. Thanks

Changes uploaded #55, #56
I am always open to all your revisions.

Best Regards,
Dalhaz

Looks awesome!! we like this version with the double tail. the scales are Great and we would like to see them more. could you grey out the scales a bit so that the black lines show through a bit more. The eyes are perfect but there is a dark spot on her chin that we would like removed.
We love the hair color and shading but would like to see the white lines back as you had on the earlier version with the black hair.
on the font. we love it but find that the d and y on the word Lady being connected make it look like a ch or aly. could you disconnect the d from the y?
Thanks

Changes uploaded #41 #42
please feel free if you need revision/something else.

Best Regards,
Dalhaz

We like your style but at this point lets work on refining #27 as we really like it. Nice artwork, very creative!

please see comments on logo #27

We love what you are doing. Please remove the red sun and color her her red instead. Her mouth and nose seem to blend together in a black blob, please refine. We also like to see a little more going on in the tail, not to the extend of the hair, just a little. If you could taper the shading of the red in her hair, darker at the head, lighter towards the ends that would be great. Thanks

Changes uploaded #27
let me know if there is something wrong/missing something.

Best Regards,
Dalhaz

we like what you did but could you connect the head to the tail and lose the dragon influence that we see with the saw tooth look. We would like to see her torso. Thanks