La Reziere Shooting ClubLogo Design Contest

Very nice.I Like it. Could you please make the following changes in order to make it a bit more elgant:

1) Duck looks more like a goose, wings might have to be shorter, pls look at other drawings,
2)Boars should be more "collected" to look meaner / fiercer, also please make larger teethsimilar to the way teeth are really, this should also give a more real look

thank you

boar more collected will look more fierce

i like the new one #44 but again boar needs to be collected not extended otherwise looks like a rabbit! Thanks

Thanks for feedback.Sorry i just don't understands with what you mean with "collected" before. But i understands now. Will work for update,