Hi Nathan,
We would like to see some more designs from you, please. We like the feeling you've created. We like the boldness and you brought a certain sophistication that works for us.
1. try lightning up the swirly line.
2. try putting some botanicals on it, maybe a rose.
3. try the swirly line underneath.
4. Please try some other designs of your own creation without our input.
5. We like the font you used for "Kuumba". Please write Kuumba Made across, all on the same line (in the same "Kuumba" font. We need to use it in different areas, in different ways.
6. Try it in black and white.
We only have 2 days left until we need to choose a winner. Right now we like your design best.
Thank you very much!