close, but get a little crazy with it. The font is not my favorite. Tie the image and the font together more, while still staying in a retro font. Maybe swap and go orange tree, brown/light brown sky. not crazy about the Teal water. In the surreal world we're imagining, water doesn't have to be blue.
#14 is great. My new favorite, I would abandon the other design (#13). I've ranked it #1. and keep playing with this one. Can you add characters to the corners, add some dark green? I like it alot, keep playing though whenever you can.
also, the font still feels too modern. You can try the classic font you used earlier on the other design, or play with some classic 70's fonts. Some font ideas http://fontsinuse.com/tags/299/1970s
Hi. Is there any way to increase the size of the font in #294? Keep the exact same font, just make it bigger without compromising the integrity of the entire image?