I hope you had a beautiful weekend and starting well you week.
I appreciate your awesome feedback as always.
Please check revisions based on your feedback and let me know if it´s all okay.
It means a lot you´re happy with the brand. We built a master piece together, I really appreciate all your great directions so we could make this really stunning and flexible brand so you can use in the future.
Thank you very much! We really love this design and would like to finalize it as the bird design. We truly appreciate the time and effort you've dedicated to accommodating our detailed requests multiple times.
Would it be possible for you to create additional logos with a catchphrase and sub logos as you did before? Specifically, I would like to request the following:
1. A logo based on design #388 with the catchphrase included.
2. A logo similar to designs #334 and #68.
3. A version of item 2 above with the catchphrase included.
4. A circular logo design like #282.
Once again, thank you for your quick revisions and proactive suggestions. We are really excited that we’re on track to achieve such a high-quality logo.
Thank you so much for the updates! The finalist phase has wrapped up, and now we’re moving into the selection phase. I’m looking forward to working with you during this phase as well.
1. I’ve realized why the circle wasn’t interrupted before, and I actually prefer it that way—keeping it uninterrupted.
2. Thank you for lowering the shape of the head, it’s perfect and exactly to my taste. That said, in a previous adjustment, I really liked how the back of the head had a rounded line. Would it be possible to make just that part a bit smoother while keeping the current overall shape?
I appreciate your feedback as always and sharing your thoughts.
I see what you mean, it was a great suggestion. I also like it better like this.
Well about the broken circle on entry #64 was because we had the "K" their, and the bird would need to have a place to hold the feets, in this case the bird is holding the circle already. I´ve thought in some options so you can compare #362 , #363 and #364.
Actually, there was another intention behind the suggestion I made earlier. I was also thinking about slightly reducing the height of the head.
Additionally, in the logo for #64, the circle is broken where it overlaps with the feet, but this one doesn’t have that feature. Is there a specific reason for that? If not, I’d like to see a version where the circle is broken as well.
And no problem at all. Take the time you need please.
I appreciate your awesome suggestions cause they are very welcome.
I also like what you done on the head of the bird, making that part more organic, it creates a great combo to be honest, I really like it.
About the circle + bird I was trying some variations, and at least the original #347 and these other two are the most balance #348, #349 . I believe its a bit your personal taste now, you might like more one them the others, they are all very balanced.
If you need anything else just let me know, feel comfortable please.
I apologize for the delayed response; things have been quite busy. However, I've finally caught up and am now able to review daily again, just like before.
The shape of the bird in #344 is perfect, thank you so much for making the adjustments. I just wanted to ask: is the current size relationship between the bird and the circle the best option? If you have any other suggestions, I’d love to see them.
I appreciate your awesome updates. And do not worry your feedback is been great. I´m happy you can alert me where I´m doing wrong so I can get the design as you want.
I did submit only this version so you can approve, and if so I will do all the other so you can appreciate.
Please let me know if it´s all okay with this version: #344
I did use my original design you like an totally adapted to the lover bird this way its as you originally liked first.
If you need anything else just let me know, feel free please.
Thank you for the revisions. I actually prefer this version over the previous one! I also really appreciate that you’ve created both sets of designs with and without the slogan.
There are just two points I’d like to request changes for:
1. The triangles are a bit too fine, so could you make them somewhere in between the previous and current versions?
2. Regarding the bird shape, I actually liked the original one you gave me as a design, but the beak was too long and the head too flat, so it didn’t resemble a lovebird, which is why I requested a change. However, now it looks a bit too much like a thick stick. Could you try to maintain the lovebird feel while avoiding the "stick-like" appearance?
I apologize for the vagueness of point 2. If there’s any confusion, please feel free to ask me anytime. I really appreciate your work and thank you for your efforts!
I hope you´re are both having a lovely weekend and I appreciate the awesome feedback as always, specially this one detail cause helps understand even better.
Please check my new designs updated based on your comments and let me know if it´s all okay.
Thank you so much for making the revisions based on my requests, and I apologize for the delayed response.
I think the idea of using both designs with filled and unfilled triangles is great. I also really appreciate you thinking of slogans, so I would like to move forward with that. and I love that the design works in black and white as well.
There were some unclear points in my previous instructions, so let me clarify them in more detail:
1. The beak is angled too downward, giving it a bit of a downward-facing impression. It doesn’t need to be entirely true to life, so I’d like it to feel more comfortable and balanced in the design.
2. I prefer the tail design from the previous version.
3. Regarding both the #281 and #283 design variations, the triangles seem a bit larger compared to #150, but I prefer the more detailed look of #150 and #68.
4. For the #283 design, I’d like to revert the "A" design back to how it was in #68.
I’m sorry for the number of revisions, but I really appreciate your work and look forward to seeing the updated version!
I also thought about a slogan if you don´t mind in case you would like to think about it. As a personal opinion I believe #276 should be the main logo when you see my proposals, since its more simple to use in all marketing materials you can think of. And you can always use #283 for other things because it can always compliment the main brand #276. Both logos can work in one color and also black and white. Even #283 one color would be worked with percentages(%) of color.
As always feel free to ask if you need anything else Rei.
After discussing with my co-founder, we have decided that #150 and #68 are the most preferred designs.
Regarding the bird's shape (especially the head), it currently looks a bit more like a hawk, and could you make it look a bit more like a lovebird? The tail of a lovebird is actually shorter, but I really like the current design, so it is fine if you prefer to leave it as is (though feel free to shorten it if you think it works better).
I would really appreciate it if this revision could be applied to both #150 and #68.
Thank you again for everything. I am looking forward to continuing to work with you!
I really love #68 and #150. I will review them again with my co-founder.
I’d love to see a version that develops #68 further. By the way, I really like the design of the letter "A," so there's no need to change that part. :)
Once again, thank you for submitting so many great designs!
Thank you so much for your revision! I truly love it.
It is unique, geometric, and at the same time luxurious, exactly what I was looking for.
To be completely honest, I am really fond of both your #68 and #107 designs. As I am not a design professional, I’m not entirely sure how to improve them to align with my preferences. My co-founder, however, prefers simpler designs and has a strong preference for #68, which is why we swapped the rankings of #68 and #107.
I hope you have a wonderful day, and once again, thank you for submitting such a fantastic logo.
Hi,
I think this is a wonderful logo. Thank you so much!
Would it be possible to build upon this idea and further develop the design of the text?
Specifically, I really liked the design of the letter "A" from the logo I ranked 4th with.
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I hope you had a beautiful weekend and starting well you week.
I appreciate your awesome feedback as always.
Please check revisions based on your feedback and let me know if it´s all okay.
It means a lot you´re happy with the brand. We built a master piece together, I really appreciate all your great directions so we could make this really stunning and flexible brand so you can use in the future.
If you need anything else just let me know.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
Thank you very much! We really love this design and would like to finalize it as the bird design. We truly appreciate the time and effort you've dedicated to accommodating our detailed requests multiple times.
Would it be possible for you to create additional logos with a catchphrase and sub logos as you did before? Specifically, I would like to request the following:
1. A logo based on design #388 with the catchphrase included.
2. A logo similar to designs #334 and #68.
3. A version of item 2 above with the catchphrase included.
4. A circular logo design like #282.
Once again, thank you for your quick revisions and proactive suggestions. We are really excited that we’re on track to achieve such a high-quality logo.
Rei
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I hope you had a beautiful week and starting a well deserved weekend.
I appreciate your awesome feedback as always.
Please check revisions and let me know if it´s all okay:
#387 | #388
If you need anything else just let me know.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards.
João
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Thank you so much for the updates! The finalist phase has wrapped up, and now we’re moving into the selection phase. I’m looking forward to working with you during this phase as well.
1. I’ve realized why the circle wasn’t interrupted before, and I actually prefer it that way—keeping it uninterrupted.
2. Thank you for lowering the shape of the head, it’s perfect and exactly to my taste. That said, in a previous adjustment, I really liked how the back of the head had a rounded line. Would it be possible to make just that part a bit smoother while keeping the current overall shape?
Thank you!
Rei
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I appreciate your feedback as always and sharing your thoughts.
I see what you mean, it was a great suggestion. I also like it better like this.
Well about the broken circle on entry #64 was because we had the "K" their, and the bird would need to have a place to hold the feets, in this case the bird is holding the circle already. I´ve thought in some options so you can compare #362 , #363 and #364.
Let me know if it´s all okay.
If you need anything else just let me know.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Actually, there was another intention behind the suggestion I made earlier. I was also thinking about slightly reducing the height of the head.
Additionally, in the logo for #64, the circle is broken where it overlaps with the feet, but this one doesn’t have that feature. Is there a specific reason for that? If not, I’d like to see a version where the circle is broken as well.
Looking forward to your thoughts!
Rei
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I hope you´re having a lovely day.
And no problem at all. Take the time you need please.
I appreciate your awesome suggestions cause they are very welcome.
I also like what you done on the head of the bird, making that part more organic, it creates a great combo to be honest, I really like it.
About the circle + bird I was trying some variations, and at least the original #347 and these other two are the most balance #348, #349 . I believe its a bit your personal taste now, you might like more one them the others, they are all very balanced.
If you need anything else just let me know, feel comfortable please.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I apologize for the delayed response; things have been quite busy. However, I've finally caught up and am now able to review daily again, just like before.
The shape of the bird in #344 is perfect, thank you so much for making the adjustments. I just wanted to ask: is the current size relationship between the bird and the circle the best option? If you have any other suggestions, I’d love to see them.
Have a great day!
Best,
Rei
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I appreciate your awesome updates. And do not worry your feedback is been great. I´m happy you can alert me where I´m doing wrong so I can get the design as you want.
I did submit only this version so you can approve, and if so I will do all the other so you can appreciate.
Please let me know if it´s all okay with this version: #344
I did use my original design you like an totally adapted to the lover bird this way its as you originally liked first.
If you need anything else just let me know, feel free please.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thank you for the revisions. I actually prefer this version over the previous one! I also really appreciate that you’ve created both sets of designs with and without the slogan.
There are just two points I’d like to request changes for:
1. The triangles are a bit too fine, so could you make them somewhere in between the previous and current versions?
2. Regarding the bird shape, I actually liked the original one you gave me as a design, but the beak was too long and the head too flat, so it didn’t resemble a lovebird, which is why I requested a change. However, now it looks a bit too much like a thick stick. Could you try to maintain the lovebird feel while avoiding the "stick-like" appearance?
I apologize for the vagueness of point 2. If there’s any confusion, please feel free to ask me anytime. I really appreciate your work and thank you for your efforts!
Rei
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I hope you´re are both having a lovely weekend and I appreciate the awesome feedback as always, specially this one detail cause helps understand even better.
Please check my new designs updated based on your comments and let me know if it´s all okay.
If you need anything else just let me know.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thank you so much for making the revisions based on my requests, and I apologize for the delayed response.
I think the idea of using both designs with filled and unfilled triangles is great. I also really appreciate you thinking of slogans, so I would like to move forward with that. and I love that the design works in black and white as well.
There were some unclear points in my previous instructions, so let me clarify them in more detail:
1. The beak is angled too downward, giving it a bit of a downward-facing impression. It doesn’t need to be entirely true to life, so I’d like it to feel more comfortable and balanced in the design.
2. I prefer the tail design from the previous version.
3. Regarding both the #281 and #283 design variations, the triangles seem a bit larger compared to #150, but I prefer the more detailed look of #150 and #68.
4. For the #283 design, I’d like to revert the "A" design back to how it was in #68.
I’m sorry for the number of revisions, but I really appreciate your work and look forward to seeing the updated version!
Best regards,
Rei
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As always I appreciate both your great directions.
Please check revisions and let me know if it´s all okay.
Updated designs here: #276 & #283
I also thought about a slogan if you don´t mind in case you would like to think about it. As a personal opinion I believe #276 should be the main logo when you see my proposals, since its more simple to use in all marketing materials you can think of. And you can always use #283 for other things because it can always compliment the main brand #276. Both logos can work in one color and also black and white. Even #283 one color would be worked with percentages(%) of color.
As always feel free to ask if you need anything else Rei.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thank you for the revision!
After discussing with my co-founder, we have decided that #150 and #68 are the most preferred designs.
Regarding the bird's shape (especially the head), it currently looks a bit more like a hawk, and could you make it look a bit more like a lovebird? The tail of a lovebird is actually shorter, but I really like the current design, so it is fine if you prefer to leave it as is (though feel free to shorten it if you think it works better).
I would really appreciate it if this revision could be applied to both #150 and #68.
Thank you again for everything. I am looking forward to continuing to work with you!
Rei
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I appreciate your awesome feedback as always.
I submitted some new variations of my designs playing a bit with it so you can appreciate.
As always take the time you need to review with your co-funder and if you need please feel free to ask for anything.
Thank you very much.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thank you so much for the wonderful revisions!
I really love #68 and #150. I will review them again with my co-founder.
I’d love to see a version that develops #68 further. By the way, I really like the design of the letter "A," so there's no need to change that part. :)
Once again, thank you for submitting so many great designs!
Best regards,
Rei
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I appreciate your awesome feedback as always, cause that helps me understand your design direction.
I worked some more simplified versions of the brand so you both can take some time to considerate them.
If you would need anything more feel comfortable to ask please.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thank you so much for your revision! I truly love it.
It is unique, geometric, and at the same time luxurious, exactly what I was looking for.
To be completely honest, I am really fond of both your #68 and #107 designs. As I am not a design professional, I’m not entirely sure how to improve them to align with my preferences. My co-founder, however, prefers simpler designs and has a strong preference for #68, which is why we swapped the rankings of #68 and #107.
I hope you have a wonderful day, and once again, thank you for submitting such a fantastic logo.
Best regards,
Rei
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I hope you´re having a beautiful day.
Thank you for your great feedback and I´m glad you like my unique logo.
Submitted a revision based on your comment, please check and let me know what do you think.
If you need changes feel free to ask please.
Your feedback is always welcome.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I think this is a wonderful logo. Thank you so much!
Would it be possible to build upon this idea and further develop the design of the text?
Specifically, I really liked the design of the letter "A" from the logo I ranked 4th with.
Best Regards,
Rei