2. colors a shade lighter and drop the burgundy from the tag line.
Your logo style guide will specify exact colors to use on light or dark backgrounds. There can also be several layout versions approved for different applications and you will want a 1 color version for when things are to be photocopied or printed in 1 color. thanks for the feedback - glad you like my concept - any other options I will be happy to do.
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