#15 &19 While I like the move away from the archer I worry that a top spins in circles and doesn't go anywhere, otherwise graphically I like the look but the message of the figure isn't conveying the message of starting from a place on par with competitors and accelerating past them.
#26, while I like the fewer bolts and the fact that one becomes many, it feels distant from the text, somehow "added" on. Can they be more integrated?