Dear Mes,
thanks for your design! We like it, as it represents clearly water, house, and sun. The design is also 'moving'. Still, we would like to ask you to make it look a bit more 'shiny'/energetic/intense, to give people the vibe of holidays ( a feel of sun beams, high temperature), so they would really feel attracted to staying some time at our house.
Thank you!
Patrick and Lotte