Can you please make the tagline more prominent and slightly biggger, it is almost unreadable at the moment. Also if you can kindly reduce the font height of KGVK. Your work looks promising. Can I please have one more idea from you along with this one?
Entry 15 is not the kind we are looking at. The modified entry 13 will be even better if you reduce the font height of KGVK bit more and deepen the shade of the tagline little more and experiment with another font option for the tagline. This entry 13 looks spirited, lively and energetic. Expecting atleast one more in similar lines.