Awesome designs thir13en - Can you submit one that has the LOVE of #14 with the background scrollwork of #16 and the lettering below as in #16? I'd LOVE to see that edit! THANKS! Kevin
Thank you for the feedback. I changed the red with a darked hue, and the background scrollwork is the same color as the outline of the word LOVE. I had to adjust the tagline in order for it to be readable. Let me know what you think.
#46 - You're Awesome - Can we try something - Less thickness to the Black outline around LOVE - and get the tagline below again somehow. You can ALSO takeaway the words LOVE in the tagline if you place it underneath..
i.e LOVE as you have it and underneath maybe with small hearts or some small graphic separators
Hey thir13en - I notice you withdraw some of your submissions that don't work for me. I'm just asking that you keep #16 submitted because even though i may be moving it down quite a bit in the rankings - it's kinda in the back of my mind as a completely alternate concept. Thanks for leaving it around if you wouldn't mind!
Before this contest ends tomorrow... I REALLY like your submissions. I'd like to see a few final changes before the contest closes tomorrow. I'll be VERY specific.
(1) Although I asked to make the scrollwork darker, I think it needs to be lighter to accomplish the end design. Maybe you can make it a BIT darker than #17 but not too much.
(2) Take the long tagline out of the upper black outline and make the black outline around LOVE even a BIT thinner than #17
(3) Keep dark heart color of #46
(4) Put the words Your Clients | Your Business | Your Life under the LOVE logo in a DARK and bold type (you can use the | for a divider or something VERY inobtrusive (thinking NOT a heart lol). You can take out the 3 repeating LOVE words in the tagline - I think that will be implied by the bigger LOVE. Plus that will give more room to make letters bolder and stand out.
(5) You can create (if you like) an alternate version that only has the words Clients | Business | Life underneath but I think I still like the clarity of having Your Clients | Your Business | Your Life