Before this contest ends tomorrow...
I REALLY like your submissions. I'd like to see a few final changes before the contest closes tomorrow. I'll be VERY specific.
(1) Although I asked to make the scrollwork darker, I think it needs to be lighter to accomplish the end design. Maybe you can make it a BIT darker than #17 but not too much.
(2) Take the long tagline out of the upper black outline and make the black outline around LOVE even a BIT thinner than #17
(3) Keep dark heart color of #46
(4) Put the words Your Clients | Your Business | Your Life under the LOVE logo in a DARK and bold type (you can use the | for a divider or something VERY inobtrusive (thinking NOT a heart lol). You can take out the 3 repeating LOVE words in the tagline - I think that will be implied by the bigger LOVE. Plus that will give more room to make letters bolder and stand out.
(5) You can create (if you like) an alternate version that only has the words Clients | Business | Life underneath but I think I still like the clarity of having Your Clients | Your Business | Your Life