Break Loose and FlyLogo Design Contest

Do you need any added tweaking before you close the contest?

better? can tweak any way you want.
Carol

OK will go back and do that.

I meant to enlarge the writing "the bumblebees way not the new. Sorry for confusion

Can you do ...the bumblebee way a bit larger? Thanks and have a great weekend.

Have fun... I have a busy weekend. later.
Carol

I am in a tough spot broken up internet connection until Sunday night. I am leaving this in first position but I like#111 too. Maybe we can further discuss in finalist stage

this one I just shortened the top bar of the F.

Hand manipulated the F in this one ... maybe it worked better than the other font? Hope you like it better. Carol

This is the most readable, it just doesn't quite have the energy.

This one has the most energy for me. But why is the F such a problem.... This one looks like a 7. Could you flip it the other way?

tried 4 different fonts. Hope one is a hit!

OK let me try other fonts and will enlarge bee.
Carol

you are right, its funky and I don't like it. If just the upper F would more look like an F. Everybody I show the logo too says they have a hard time reading the "Fly". If you can't adjust the upper case F to make it look more like an F, can you use a slightly different font, like similar to the other logo us submitted, number eighty seven? Just not the yellow, same grunchy black/gray. Also, please slightly enlarge ...the bumblebee way. Thanks.

The lower case f is a bit funky but uploading it.

Just had another idea. How would it look if you were to use a "lower case" f?

Better, but still looks more like a "Hy". Can you try using the font from your other logo #87 for the "and Fly" but use the colors for this one? Also, I got more feedback: ....the bumblebee way should be a bit larger.
Your logo is everyone's favor! We are just trying to perfect it. Thanks for your efforts thus far.

OK will adjust that if I get a break at work or after... thanks
Carol

I really liked the grunge effect and would like it back. The only thing needing correction where the 2 horizontal lines on the F in Fly. Maybe disconnecting the lower horizontal from the "l" would help prevent Fly from looking like "Hy" ? Can you change that? Thanks.

adjusted the F and took out some of the 'grunge' effect ... hope this works better.
Carol

That's a bit too bold and no longer balanced. I like the previous font, just need the horizontal lines in the F to be more pronounced. The Fl in Fly almost looks like an H. Is that something you can change?

When I get home from work.

Hi Carol, I showed the logo to a whole bunch of friends and they all like it a lot. It has the right energy, color combo, looks professional and sends the message out the right way. Great job. A few people said they would like the "F" in fly a bit more clearer. Not sure though. I like it. Can you give me a slightly different "F" just to compare? I like the font in general.

great
off to work now!
Carol

Like the bee much better. Thanks!

on it soon.

:)

not sure how you want me to revise but will do some options.
Carol

Much better without brackets!

Oh, and can you change the bee to look more like a bee not a fly? :)

Morning Carol,
Yes, variations would be great. Maybe "improve" the looks of the bee a bit too?

Sure. thansk

thanks just let me know if you want to see variations.
Carol

Not so much, looks like a label for honey or such

This is great too, except the brackets, which restrict. Can you loose them and see what it looks like? Thanks!

Pretty awesome. I like it a lot! Not sure if any changes are needed....