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Beautiful.
+ For fun can you try connecting the E and N at the bottom instead of top, and the O and B at the top instead of bottom?
+I think green and blue is too many colors, we should stick with one of the two (FYI not all our marketing will include the word networks)
+ Enlarge the graphic (not text) by 115% or so, centering on the N line as you have it is good.
+ Where you connected the O and B, you clipped (cut) a little too much of the O and B...a littttle too much white-space there.
+ The 3 orange lights on the left should match the dark brown tone of that side. The 3 on the right, the lighter dark brown tone on that side. The 1 center light should be something like R80,G160,B255
+Make Networks a little lighter
Thanks. I still like the Seriff better. Can we try:
-Smaller Seriff than original,less prominent
-Combine the E and N with a line on top (keep your other original line between the O and B.
- Space "Networks" out so it covers the width of Kenobi
- Move the K in closer and the I out further so that the logo is centered in between the N and O.
- The two sides of the logo should probably be varying tones of our brown/grey guidelines ...not sure play with the colors. Inspiration is: https://dribbble.com/shots/2439534-Obi-Wan-Kenobi-Flat-Design-Icon
Thanks for feedback, i will work on it. I see you updating the brief and attached the screenshot of the designs i hope you can remove it because this is blind phase.
The grip of the sword should look like mirror/reflective images of a K (does a good job now, could be a slightly nicer K) but I still like this version the best.
Maybe do the right half in the lighter color and the lkeft half in the darker...the sword splits up the middle.
This revision is still the best. For font inspiration good Star Wars Fonts and look at the images. Don't steal but subliminally, that is the messaging we want...
We need the wings to be a little less like the Jedi crest. I do like the overall shape resembling circulare. The K's could be more interesting. I am editting the contest to give you better font ideas.
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+ For fun can you try connecting the E and N at the bottom instead of top, and the O and B at the top instead of bottom?
+I think green and blue is too many colors, we should stick with one of the two (FYI not all our marketing will include the word networks)
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+ Enlarge the graphic (not text) by 115% or so, centering on the N line as you have it is good.
+ Where you connected the O and B, you clipped (cut) a little too much of the O and B...a littttle too much white-space there.
+ The 3 orange lights on the left should match the dark brown tone of that side. The 3 on the right, the lighter dark brown tone on that side. The 1 center light should be something like R80,G160,B255
+Make Networks a little lighter
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Blue as the offset color? IDK.
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-Smaller Seriff than original,less prominent
-Combine the E and N with a line on top (keep your other original line between the O and B.
- Space "Networks" out so it covers the width of Kenobi
- Move the K in closer and the I out further so that the logo is centered in between the N and O.
- The two sides of the logo should probably be varying tones of our brown/grey guidelines ...not sure play with the colors. Inspiration is: https://dribbble.com/shots/2439534-Obi-Wan-Kenobi-Flat-Design-Icon
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Maybe do the right half in the lighter color and the lkeft half in the darker...the sword splits up the middle.
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