Kelley Business Services, IncLogo Design Contest

oops....so sorry.....newbie here....

yes. please dont disscuss that here :)

Okay.....except please know that they put the dots there because we asked for them....I understand where you are coming from , though. If you win, you can change dots then?

Hi,

I do all revisions requested except the dot between tagline.

because it's idea from other designer.

Really like the S.....Can we look at several changes? 1) I'd like the box to be 3 colors 2) Please change tag line so that the font is up and down...not slanted. 3) rather than have the periods in the tagline, can you make those a dot in between? 4) Can we try a font that is not quite as heavy, and can you make the S and O and S slightly larger? Really like this a lot, Keegan. Thanks for all of your work!

the swoosh forms "S"

My favorite of yours.....thanks for your work, Keegan!

Thanks Keegan - These are definitely on the right track........thanks for your work! Appreciate it!

Hi Keegan- I liked a lot of your designs,,,,but after seeing all of the other logos coming in, I decided I liked logos using a box on the left the best....and am now trying to see how we can incorporate splash...or dots...or circles of color representing printing.....I like some of your logos that you have recently submitted.....you are definitely on the right track.....thanks for your work!

please check my newest designs

welll.. actually I've already offered box concept at very early of your contest :) but it seem's you're not interested.

this is #5

Thanks, Keegan.....This creative process sure evolves.....just wanted to let you know my latest thoughts in the event you were still interested :-) Thanks!

I'll think about it now :) I hope I can come with good designs soon ..

Keegan. I have been trying to think about a way to make printing more visual......is there a way to have a swirl of different colored dots coming out of box, or going around the box....or a splash of colors coming out of box? Love a box on the left for the shipping side of my business....just trying to see if there is any way to make the printing a little more visual? Thanks for your work!

Keegan, I really like your logos....you do nice work.....as the others are coming in, I am finding that I am drawn to those that have incorporated boxes....I like that visual as we are an authorized shipping outlet....thanks for your work!

Keegan- Can we put SHIPONSITE in all upper case so we can make our tag line bigger? I like somehow differentiating ON so that it makes SHIP stand out. Any ideas of something box like for logo on left? Thanks for your time!

For our revision...think 1) Letters up and down not slanted 2) All upper case letters - emphasize S and O and S if possible. 3) Logo to left of name that ground other logos on business cards. 4) Tagline We Ship. We Print. Plus More Thanks Keegan! I appreciate all of your work!

Thanks!

Thank you so much!

I'll try to find a way.

Keegan- You have been so wonderful with all of your suggestions....we love this logo when it is by itself....but as we are an authorized shipping outlet for UPS, DHL, USPS and Fed Ex, we use their logos on our business cards, etc.....and it has occurred to us that this logo kind of gets lost :-( Darn. I think we need something more substantial to make it stand out....ie a colored block on the left, etc. Something that will not get lost when their are 5 other logos on the media. I am sorry that I have taken up your time on this logo...please accept my apologies. By itself, this has been my favorite.

revision.

I'll do my best :)

sure!

Like this.....can you do this without the black background? Thanks for your work!

please check this one

you're right :)

In your logo #6, the blue and yellow circle starts at the P and ends at the I and appears more oval......which I like better.....could you change this accordingly? Thanks for your work!

logo on black background

Yes, please ....thanks!

except for the tagline and trying one with straight font... right?

Like your logo with the oval colored circle the most....thanks for your work!

S,O,S larger....Do you mean like design #10 ?

Like your others better.....thanks!

Of your logos that have the colored oval, I like this one the best. Wonder what it would look like if 1) you made letters upright as opposed to slanted 2) Could you keep all upper case letters but make the S and O and S larger than the other letters? Please change tag to "Your shipping and printing solution"

Thanks for your work!

ooh.....I really like partner.....but I also really like solution....they are both strong...but in different ways- let me think about which I prefer...we can eliminate neighbour as it doesn't convey as well as the other two...thanks!

or "Your Shipping and Printing Solution"

or "Your Shipping and Printing Neighbour"

I like your current tag. it's sounded more friendly. but I think the word "neighboorhood" is kinda too complicated.

how about "Your Shipping & Printing Partner" ?

Another suggestion for a different logo.....what if we had a backdrop of 4 boxes, side by side, that were each a different color, that had our name and tagline within? Would like to explore that look, as well. Thanks for your work!

What would this look like with Upper and lower case....ShipOnSite......I like the differentiation of the lettering

In comparing to your others, I like that the others have more color.

I like all of your logos.....could we modify tag? Either We Ship. We Print. And More! or We Ship & We Print & More......or something like that? Or do you like my current tag? Just trying to figure a way to make Printing more prominent...thanks for your work!

I like all of your logos.....could we modify tag? Either We Ship. We Print. And More! or We Ship & We Print & More......or something like that? Or do you like my current tag? Just trying to figure a way to make Printing more prominent...thanks for your work!

I like all of your logos.....could we modify tag? Either We Ship. We Print. And More! or We Ship & We Print & More......or something like that? Or do you like my current tag? Just trying to figure a way to make Printing more prominent...thanks for your work!

I like all of your logos.....could we modify tag? Either We Ship. We Print. And More! or We Ship & We Print & More......or something like that? Or do you like my current tag? Just trying to figure a way to make Printing more prominent...thanks for your work!