Hi Brendan, thanks, definitely an improvement, but one comment though, it is not necessary that logo will have a windsurfer there. Waves, maybe only one letter of a logo would do the trick. Less colors please. Have a look on brands like billabong, o'neal, quicksilver f.ex. they are boarding companies as well and logos are so simple and cool. Cheers, Maciej
I'm afraid, this is not a right direction. Please have a look at my previous e-mail to get the feeling and visit some of the pages there. #7 has nothing in common with water, waves, surf feeling. You live in RSA, man! Capetown is one of the best sailing spots on Earth! Try to think about the atmosphere there. Some waves, flowers etc... maybe this is the direction? Cheers, Maciej
#11, 12, 13 - We have to work on fonts, those are completely out of my taste. Can we please go more graffiti style, skate type of fonts? And if we could use more lighter colors, that would create atmosphere (say, light blue, white, yellow). Pastel color would also be interesting. thanks!
#18 That's more like it. Direction is good. Can we please have more clarity, as it looks like in the fog. Flower is not bad, but I would prefer to have it outlined, rather than a picture, with solid line. can we also make it more like a drawing, rather than a picture. Good direction though! Cheers, Maciej
Lets go back to original in terms of original color of the board. Can we please get rid of this pinky flower and replace it with real orchid drawing, not ready picture. Can we also replace yellow in font with white and grey outline. Please make board even more fat or maybe make it an elipse? Making it more like an emblem (not sure if its a right word). thanks, Maciej
Can we please make colors more visible, it looks like opacity is set to very low. Can we please get rid of 3D effect from the ovel (although I am not sure, because I can not see well due to low intensity of the pic) Could you also make it more board like, fat board, like a skim-board shape. thanks! Maciej
Reference to #24 I like this one. Good potential in terms of shape, feel. Can we please focus now more on font. I still do not get the feeling that this is the right one. I will repeat myself again, but can we make colors more visible, it still seems like it is behind white glass.
Maybe we could try to use the slogan and play with it on the board's border. Can you please add an outline to the board. Lets see how it will change.
I will comment only on #32, as remaining ones are not quiet what I had in mind. B&W, unfortunately are unreadable and I think we should re-think the concept if we would like ot dig in B&W as current proposals are to heavy. O, back to #32 - this one is closest to what I had in mind. Could you please lighter the outline a bt, so that it is not drawing that much attention. Maybe grey would be a bit better. font here is interesting, bending id a bit was not bad (like in #24), so we could try this as well. Can we also work on amount of flowers. They are maybe overflowing the whole logo and making it too busy to watch. Can we also keep experimenting with the shape of the board a bit? I would like to play with color a bit later as well, but let's leave it for later. thanks, Maciej
Hi MAciej. I have widened the the board from top to bottom just a little. I have used the shape of a skim board found at this web site there are others and the designs are worth a look http://img.alibaba.com/photo/50448682/skimboard.jpg