Karma ConnectedLogo Design Contest

Yes. Thank you. :)

I've given the ribbon a more organic feel - does it work better?

It is from your logo. It is under the slogan.

Hello and thanks for your feedback.

At this stage of the contest, designers cannot see each others' submissions. This ensures that contest holders like you receive the broadest possible range of different ideas. It also gives designers the freedom to develop their own ideas independently.

I have to ask, therefore, if the idea of using a brush stroke is yours, or whether this idea is inspired by another designer's submission?

Maybe a brush stroke like you have under the slogan ?

Yes, we like the tagline effects. The ribbon ending on the letters is not ideal - what else can you adjust to make it strong yet, feel connected?

Hello and thanks for reviewing my submission.

Do you have any feedback for me?

Regards,
Steve