Love what you've done with the heart! Can you change the one point perspective to a point somewhere to the right of the logo instead of centralized within the middle "a" itself. Also, could you incorporate 3 stars, musical notes or butterflies to represent each of the girls? And finally, can you try different fonts on the "what goes around comes around?" Thanks.
Can you increase the size of the logo on the page, then post two versions, one with gray background and one with black background, so that we can compare apples to apples, ie with other logo's. Thanks.
hi temmora, thanks for your feedback. here some revision, I submit two designs increase the size in two deference background (black and grey) hope you like it..
Both look awesome! Few subtle changes ... 1) Place the "3D effect" on the 3 stars at the top, consistent with the rest of the logo of entry #77. 2) Make the cursive line leading into the last "a" a little thinner just before it joins the "a" itself, similar to the cursive line leading into the first "a". 3) Would like to see the "reflection line" running through the logo as a single horizontal line giving it more of a metal appearance. 4) Would also like to see a version with the above changes but the "reflection line" more closely mirrors the slogan "what goes around comes around," to see how it would appear if this line were a reflection from the slogan itself. Thanks again.
hi temmora, thanks for put me as a finalist. here some revision base on your direction.(2 version in 2 background color, black and grey) any other suggestion?
Entry #87 is awesome! But I think I was confusing on the instructions. I like the final "a" in entry #77 better, I just wanted the line connecting the final "a" to be a little thinner. You can maybe make it the same thickness as the line that connects the "K" to the very 1st "a". Also, make the slogan "what goes around comes around" the same consistent brightness as in entry #77, as opposed to having it vary as it does in entry #87. That should be it ... I think.
Awesome! Please place entry #89 on a white and gray background as well, so that I can compare apples to apples. Thanks for everything! You've been great!
Hi temmora, I really sorry, I cannot submit your final request Because I'm out of town, but I promised you I will Submit it after I back, if time not run out for this contest to submit.
They all look awesome. Two small issues: 1) On the white background, the middle of the reflection line across the lettering is so light, the edges of the logo almost disappear. 2) Is it possible to get the logo on all 3 backgrounds, or is there an additional cost? Not being designers, it becomes somewhat time consuming for us to attempt to manipulate any images post-design. Thanks again, we'll wrap this up shortly.
no, same size, I only change the background. sometimes black colour will affect the visual appearance. but if you want to change thinner or thicker . I can change it for you...
1) Try to step the slogan font only down one size in thickness, and 2) Reverse the shading of the lettering, where the lighter coloring is at the top half and the darker is at the bottom. This make sense since the "light source" is no longer coming from the bottom of the image as it does on the other versions ,where the white slogan serves as the light source. And that should be it ...
1) Increase the thickness of the slogan of entry #100 one size. In other words, overlay slogan font size from logo #99 with the "Karma" from logo #100. 2) Increase the shadow of entry #98 by one level. And that's all folks!
Clarification on 2) Slightly darken the shadow behind the "Karma" letters of entry #98, so that it has more of a 3D effect against the gray background. There is not a large contrast between the shadow of the lettering and the gray background of entry #98 because of the closeness of the colors. You make even consider a shade lighter gray color? Thanks.
Love entry #89, #101, and #102. Quick questions, where is the one point perspective centered on the logo? At the center of the heart? And 2) Do you think the depth of the shadow consistently fits each letter? For example, the thickness of the shadow on the top of the "K" is much thicker than the shadow on the bottom of the final "a". Thanks.
Thanks for love my design, In this design we have many point of perspective, (I just want make it more dynamic and given moving fx) Do you want me to make single perspective, And make the depth shadow consistent ?
Your choice of perspective points is excellent, just wanted to see what the design would look like with a more consistent shadow depth across the board ... maybe about the depth of the first "a". Thanks.
1) Increase the depth of the lettering on entry #105 a hair thicker, and maybe two levels thicker for entry #103 and #104, as these look thinner secondary to their color schemes. 2) Place the perspective back to the original position of the previous entries, ie #89, #101, and #102 respectively. Thanks.
Sure, I like the consistency of the shadow depth across the lettering #103, #104, #105, but can you increase the depth slightly? In other words, make the depth of shadow as deep as the "K" from entry #89, but consistent across all the lettering as you did in entry #105. Thanks.
Looks good, but forgot the second request to place the perspective back to the position of the original entries #89, #101, and #102. Also, like the slightly lighter shadow of entry #89 as opposed to the darker shadow of entry #108 on the black background. Soon as we nail the right 3D look we are finished! Thanks.
Lol!! Looks like we've gone full circle: entry #110 looks like #102, entry #111 appears to be #101, #112 is consistent with #89. No worries. Let me try two more things so we can finish this up: 1) On the last 3 posted entries, make the depth of the shadow of the remaining letters ("arma") equivalent to the depth of the first letter ("K"). 2) After the above change, have the darkness of the shadow and the outline of entry #110, match the shading and the outline of entry #99. This version is easier to see against the white background. Of course, keep the color scheme of entry #110 the same. Thanks.
..thank you for your patience to guide me. I have problems with the English language ... :( let's try again, here some revision. 1. make my last entry #110 , #111 and #112 have a depth of the shadow like the depth of the letter "K" 2. and after that change the shadow and outline for white design background design like #99 is that correct? just let me know if I wrong.
No worries, you've been very gracious thus far, no complaints. It's difficult for anyone to translate visual changes into words. Final changes, take entry #113, #114, and #115 and change them to the same perspective as entry #89 and #99, keeping EVERYTHING else the same. This is so that I can compare the two perspectives, now that everything else appears to be fine. Also, after the above changes, try a second version of entry #113, with a slogan font increase of one size in thickness.
No worries, you've been very gracious thus far, no complaints. It's difficult for anyone to translate visual changes into words. Final changes, take entry #113, #114, and #115 and change them to the same perspective as entry #89 and #99, keeping EVERYTHING else the same. This is so that I can compare the two perspectives, now that everything else appears to be fine. Also, after the above changes, try a second version of entry #113, with a slogan font increase of one size in thickness.
sorry have to wait, revision, 1. perspective change (#116, #117, #118) base on entry #89 and #99 2. second version of entry #113, increase a slogan font one size thickness (#119) is that correct?
do not worry, we have plenty of time. we can communicate via email. but I can not give my email now, until you determine the winner of the contest (regulation at the logotournament) you can speed up the announcement and we can communicate via email.
What is the difference between entry #89 and entry #118? The only thing I was trying to accomplish with the final request was to view the difference between entries #113, #114, and #115, and another version where the perspective was similar to entry #89 ... but the depth of the lettering would be equal to that of entries #113, #114, and #115. If you can work up this final version, we can be done. This same version was the one I was trying to reach previously. Thanks.
...I really sorry temmora. I think i miss understanding about what you want... you want me to change only "the perspective", correct? here the revision.
Yes, you understood it correctly. You changed the prespective, but I wanted the last versions changed to the perspective of entry #89, with the only difference being an equal depth of shadow across all the letters. The only problem I'm having with entry #89, is the thickness of the "K" is greater than any of the other letters. Thanks.
Final clarification of above: Entry #89 is coming TOWARD you, entry #125 is coming from the lower LEFT, entry #115 is flying from the lower RIGHT. If I had to choose among what we have now, I would choose #114, #115, and #119, but I would definitely prefer the logo flying TOWARD the viewer (hence #89), with the depth of shadow adjusted accordingly, with a consistent thickness across the letters. Thanks.