I've also noticed with some of your designs you've gone for original made text, all of which looks nice, i was wondering if you could bring that to this and aid this design you've done after fixing the flames and creating original text to go with it, perhaps keeping it within the format you've done or furthering it,
The tribal factor can even be pushed into a graffiti look if you could, but then again this is up to you, as it is right now the flames and the text itself are not a bad start at all,
Thanks,