Jumbo Bright PromptersLogo Design Contest

Hello,
designs uploaded.
for #150:
1) just the eye #158
2) eye and name #159
3) eye, name and tag line #160
4) just the name #161
5) just the name and tag line #162

for #151:
1) just the eye #163
2) eye and name #164
3) eye, name and tag line #165
4) just the name #166
5) just the name and tag line #167

for the color version:
1) just the eye #142
2) eye and name #148
3) eye, name and tag line #147
4) just the name #168
5) just the name and tag line #169

for the black background version:
1) eye and name #156

hope this complete. ok you can close the contest now so i can upload the final files (JPG, AI, PDF). Thanks :)

-color version just the name and tagline

-color version just the name

-grayscale version #151
-name and tagline

-grayscale version #151
-just the name

-grayscale version #151
-eye, name and tagline

-grayscale version #151
-eye and the name

-grayscale version #151
-just the eye

-black and white version #150
-name and tagline

-black and white version #150
-just the name

-black and white version #150
-eye, name and tagline

-black and white version #150
-eye and name

-black and white version #150
-just the eye

Thank you very much, will upload. please close the contest so i can upload final files and other file format. thanks.

Wolv, very nice job on the BW versions and the updated mark. Let's go with 150 AND 151. Please add a version of both (B/W) with 1) just the eye, 2) eye and name, 3) eye, name and tag line 4) just the name, 5) just the name and tag line. (We will need all B/W versions in JPEG, A.I, and PDF).
And here are the final versions for the COLOR versions that we will need in 3 formats (JPG, A.I, and PDF):
142
147
148
150
151
156
(Also, please add a full color version of just the text (Jumbo Bright Prompters) without the eye portion (one with name and tag line and one with name only). Sorry for those late additions. That will be all. Thanks

Hello,
so i have made some updates and suggestions on the black and white version. please take a look.

i think the best b/w version is #152. and the grayscale version is #151. if you don't like the halftone effect, i suggest using #150 with solid.

all and all the reflection on the eye should stay, otherwise the eye looks "dead" like in #153.

i also increase the R trademark sign 50% bigger. looks good now.

ok let me know if you need anything else. i'm ready to help. thanks

-black background version with R trademark 50% bigger

- another possible version of the black and white

- another possible version of the black and white

- if i remove the reflection the result is not as good. it looks "dead". so i do think the reflection should stay.

- or i can use the "halftone" effect on the middle ring. this creates the illusion of a softer color. this is completely black and white, not grayscale.

and if it's grayscale, might aswell use the grayscale version fully like this.

-my suggestion is using the middle ring in black and the reflection stays.
-the reflection help soften the eye so it doesn't look scary.

-decrease the width of the outer ring by 100 %...
-change the inner ring to be gray, rather than black
i don't think this looks correct...

-increase the size of the R trademark by 50%
-no tagline

-increase the size of the R trademark by 50%

Wolv, thanks for those versions. On all the logos, can you increase the size of the registered trademark. Maybe 50% bigger.

Also, on the black and white versions, you might have noticed that it looks more like a target, after having removed the different colors of each "ring" of the eyeball, so here's what might fix it: please decrease the width of the outer ring by 100 %...and change the inner ring to be gray, rather than black (so, more of a gray scale). I'm not sure if that will fix the look of the black and white versions, but it might. If you have some suggestions, I'm open to them. The current black and white versions look kind of plain and a little scary at the same time.

Can we get just a couple of changes to the B&W and Inverse versions of these please?

Also, we'd love to close out this contest and get the final files.

We had a glitch on our side for a day, we couldn't leave comments. Sorry for the delay.

so ok, here are the versions :
0) logo with R trademark #140
1) Without the tag line #141
2) Just the eye (no text) #142
3) Black and White with tag line #143
4) Black and White without the tag line #144
5) Black and White of just the eye #145
6) Inverted version (background is black) No tag line #146

once you pick me as the winner, i will send the final files in EPS and JPG because i can only send those two files in here. The rest of the files (.AI .EPS .PDF .JPG and .PNG), i will put on google drive so you can download it. Thank you very much :)

- logo in black background

- logo in black and white
- reflection on the eye removed
- icon only version

- logo in black and white
- reflection on the eye removed
- without tagline

- logo in black and white
- reflection on the removed

- icon only version
- full color

- logo without tagline
- full color

- logo with the R trademark
- full color

sure do. have just read this. will send you all the requested version right after this. please wait.

This looks great, Wolv. Nice work. This is the one want to go with (#139). One thing you can add is the registered trademark (R) next to the "S" in prompters. I had forgotten to mention that.
Eventually, please include an A.I file. JPEG and a PDF.
We also need the following versions:
1) Without the tag line
2) Just the eye (no text)
3) Black and White with tag line
4) Black and White without the tag line
5) Black and White of just the eye
6) Inverted version for social media (background is black) No tag line

Note that on ALL black and white versions, the reflection on the eye should be eliminated

It's probably best to show the proof of each of these versions before providing the A.I, JPEG, and PDF versions

Thanks

the update is #137 with original angle, border thickness and black tagline without period.
#138 with original angle, 20% thinner border thickness and black tagline without period
#139 with 10% less angle, 20% thinner border thickness and black tagline without period

let me know if you need anything else :) i'm ready to help

the update is #137 with original angle, border thickness and black tagline without period.
#138 with original angle, 20% thinner border thickness and black tagline without period
#139 with 10% less angle, 20% thinner border thickness and black tagline without period

let me know if you need anything else :) i'm ready to help

- 10% reduced angle on the eye
- 20% thinner border from original
- black tagline without period.

- original angle on the eye
- 20% thinner border from original
- black tagline without period.

- original angle on the eye
- original border thickness
- black tagline without period.

sure, will keep give you the option with the angles and will update next. please wait. thanks

Wolv, thanks for the modifications. We went back to the drawing board and here's what we came up with:
The logo loses its appeal when we reduce the angle of the eye, so I think we'll keep it as is. I was hoping to reduce the angle by even 10 to 15 percent, but I'm not sure if that will work. Play with it a little.
Please reduce the thickness of the border by 20% rather than 50%. It's too thin with the changes you made.
Also, I think we're going to go with black text for the tag line (so no changes). But please delete the periods at the end of the tag line... and re-center. Thanks

- even flatter angle on the eye
- thinner border
- blue tagline

- even flatter angle on the eye
- thinner border
- limegreen tagline

- even flatter angle on the eye
- thinner border
- orange tagline

- even flatter angle on the eye
- thinner border
- black tagline

- flatter angle on the eye about 25 degrees
- thinner border
- blue tagline

- flatter angle on the eye about 25 degrees
- thinner border
- limegreen tagline

- flatter angle on the eye about 25 degrees
- thinner border
- orange tagline

- flatter angle on the eye about 25 degrees
- thinner border
- black tagline

have just read this, will also update as requested.
ok designs updated:
#126 #127 #128 #129 with flatter angle about 25 degrees and different color tagline as requested.
#130 #131 #132 #133 with even flatter angle and different color tagline.

let me know if you need anything else. Thanks.

Congratulations on being our finalist!
Our owners meeting produced the following suggestions:
Try the tagline in orange (yellow-orange) or lime green. Also, try the same blue for the tagline that is in 'bright'

Also, would you please try an angle for the eye that is flatter? We don't want to narrow the opening of the eye. We're just wondering if we might like the angle less of a 45 degree and more of a 30 degree angle.

Thanks Wolv!
The concern is that the tagline is just a little lost

right, will revise the design next. thanks for the rank :)
ok designs updated with thinner border:
#126 #127 #128 #129 with flatter angle about 25 degrees and different color tagline as requested.
#130 #131 #132 #133 with even flatter angle and different color tagline.

let me know if you need anything else. Thanks.

Thank you Wolv. Also, please adjust image so that the eye isn't on an angle as much. In other words, please have the eye more horizontal. Right now, it's at about 45 degrees. Please try it at about 20-25 degrees. And, please decrease the border thickness another 50%. Thank you

thank you very much.
yes, the update is in #42 and #43.

thanks

-flipped
-decrease the thickness of the border by 50%
-decrease the reflection on the eye
-bolder tagline

-flipped
-decrease the thickness of the border by 50%
-decrease the reflection on the eye
-normal tagline

Wolv, nice work on this logo. Please flip the image so that the eye runs from upper right to lower left, rather than upper left to lower right. Also, decrease the thickness of the border by 50%. And if you can make the tag line a little more bold (if that's even possible), that might help. And, please decrease the size of the reflection on the eye a little bit. Thank you

more definition on the eye

variation on color

abstract eye. rectangle represents teleprompter. you can also see J as company first initial.