My concern is that it is too long, can you try different version on two lines? Do not like the grey, too low key. am open to any suggestion even 2.0 effects but keep in mind that the logo is also used on invites of clubs and they add DJ, usually on top. BTW see you are a metal musician, my dad has a meta store in Italy, Mariposa Duomo.
# 54 don't cut the end of the J, can you place on top of the g using the same terminal part of the g on the j but maybe you are right looks better this way. Thanks for your great work.