I definitely like the trailing sakura branch. The reason I like the lower case j in #102 is that it's more distinct and would stand alone if I shorten it to "j brew" for swag.
I definitely like the trailing sakura branch. The reason I like the lower case j in #102 is that it's more distinct and would stand alone if I shorten it to "j brew" for swag.
Thanks for the quick response. I'm being too picky, perhaps, but the roundness of your petals look more like plum flowers to me than sakura. It's a subtle difference but one my eyes pick up.
Also, in terms of numbers of flowers, I will be asking that the number included (for those with multiple) be 6 - two parents and four kids.
I'm still going back and forth with #107 as I like the coffee cup more than I thought I would, but I think the particular flower arrangement doesn't quite match..I understand this can be seen both as steam and branch, but as sakura typically aren't linear that way it doesn't do for me what I would like.
I really like the writing style in all your submissions. Thanks for your efforts.
Completely understand. Let me know how the new batch looks. I can easily work on the shape of the petal more if need be. The coffee cup design is actually my favorite. You get the wording that you like plus the added bonus of having a unique element than you can use in addition to the logo with which to brand yourself.
I understand about the linearity so I revised the design a bit. Hope you like it.
I like the new batches..I think playing around with the way they branch from the coffee cup will be needed, but your point about branding is very, very well taken.
I like the concept. I think I like #129 because the i figure looks more like a person handing it off.
Could you make the cup look a little more like the original "u"..more abstract, perhaps. I'm playing with it in my mind as you got me thinking about the branding with the cup and sakura..We'll have to play with the branching pattern a bit too.
There's something that's not quite right with the branching pattern..starts out thin in the cup, then gets thick, then thin branches. Anyway, I look forward to your top 5 revisions.
Thanks. I like the branching pattern in #159 more, and noticed the additional branch detail..how will this show up in print, generally?
I think I like the boldness of the original cups. Also, though I like the way the sakura at the end of the y frames things, it technically represents a 7th flower and I prefer to keep just 6, ideally on the same "tree".
I'd been thinking about the red stripe, and need to stare at that a few more times.
The wider cup is growing on me.."fuller" in appearance, a bit more negative space.
If I could see #159 without the flower on the y and with different lettering/coloring for "brew" (perhaps a tad bolder, and red) that would be great. Thanks!
I would like to see a couple of variations..as I may shorten it up to "j brew" for certain swag items, can I see that with the same color scheme? Alone, and perhaps next to (or under) the coffee cup.
Also, it looks like I can request a colored background...white makes the most sense here, but do you see any background that makes sense? Black background with white logo/lettering?
As for the background white will give you the most flexibility. The logo is completely editable, so any designer can change the colors if you ever need to use it on a dark background.
So I understand that the colors can be manipulated after the fact, but what about the image itself? Specifically, could I have a designer create #196 or perhaps the cup alone with the available file after the fact if I choose your logo as the winner, or is that something you and I would negotiate after the contest is complete (or later on)? Sorry, new to this, so a few logistical questions.
No problem. If you went with any of my designs I would be able to provide you with files with and without the cup, so you would have everything you need. Another designer could also manipulate the image as needed. I do work with many of my LogoTournament clients after the project is closed (as do many other designers) if you need anything and don't have a local resource you use. Make sense?
Thanks again for your efforts! This is a logo I can be proud of and represents my vision for the cafe well. I've got 6 people in my family, and though in my mind it was close between yours and one other, the final vote in my household last night (including my 14 month old) was unanimous.
I will look forward to receiving the final files. As discussed, I would really like to have something like #196 as well as a cup on its own (with the underlying swipe, as per the parent logo). For #196, do you think the j is a tad big for the overall look?
Anyway, let me know the logistics at this point, and I thank you again for your creative work these past several days.
Thanks for the files. Hopefully you got what you needed from my end.
As for variations, I would appreciate an all black and white as well as inverted black/white (text in white, black background). Also, is there any need for .AI and .PNG formats?
I'll also wait to hear regarding the solitary cup/swipe as well as "jbrew" variation.