JuiceboxLogo Design Contest

thanks for feedback
"i" as a straw is my original concept and i can modify it.
but 'O' as square is not my concept and i have not entered it while in Blind Phase. So I cannot make it look square as i have to follow designers code of conduct.

If you have asked other designers to make 'O' as square and if it is your own original suggestion followed by other designers......then only i can make it look square.

I hope you understand.
submitting revised entries with straw correction soon.

Thanks for valuable feedback

Here is a friends comment. The “i” as a straw is a good idea but needs to be integrated more as it disappears. I would make the orange peel a square “o” but leave the inside wedges a circle to reinforce the “box” idea

Also, can you smooth out the straw

Can you take away the shadow. Try a flat background

feedback appreciated :)