Can you try a serif font for the title and remove the apostrophe on the tagline? That one is on me, not you, I realized after submission, I was quick to type.
Oh of course and thank you for your time on this! The blocky lettering reminds me more of letterman type jackets, I know it's techy in some ways, but I think next to the wildlife, it takes it away. The mountains and sun are too big and the mountains remind me of a volcano. I would say nature should be more subtle in the logo, but gives off a tech feel.
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #103 use serif font
Regards,
Jefry
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #86 #85 and #84 use slate blue and different font.
Regards,
Jefry
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I submit a new designs proposal. I am open for feedback, don't hesitate to let me know. Your feedback is very useful
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Jefry