JRLogo Design Contest

hi there,
I like this... the more worn through the better!

#128 is my favorite, but i would like to see more grungy, if you feel you want to

cheers

hi there

thanks for the feedback – I wasn't sure but it did seem to feel good with a grungy look. I'll see what I can do.

cheers

Michael

the more I think about this the idea it should work as one solid colour is important. Imagine it printed on coaching material – really raw and in your face.

in one colour there is no limit to what you can do. I've got the second colour overlaid but deliberately mis-registered, like a grungy screen print.

what got me is the words 'must have'. earthy, raw and desirable. a brand that I connect with in terms of creating a desirability is Deus Custom Motorcycles. It has this earthy rawness about everything they do. I feel a similar attitude would work here.

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#137 a bondi blue version

I can see this on a shirt – and I can imagine someone saying where'd you get that shirt!!? I think the shirt should be so good it recruits business!
I think the tag words could be etched over the logo as per the blue version I've just done - integrate them into the design.

Too gungy?

different custom font.

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Embossed/stamped. This would be in two colours - black and white on red. It would be difficult to achieve this effect in one colour, I'll try.

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Variation on stamping - more colours though so this might not be what you're after. It would be white and black (plus grey made from the black)

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This one is getting a little bit hard to read - thought I'd show you anyway. This is one colour printed on red.

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can you,
use same font as in #191 in same outlined idea as #341

cheers

this is good.

#362 i like...

can you give me an example if you cleaned it up?polished it a bit and reduced the size of 'transformation coach'
cheers

great work.. u could win this, i'll need card design done also if you do.

cheers

i think #362 may look better with central letters and circle filled??

i may be wrong about the filling of the middle letters... looked at your profile, and like the idea you are holding up..

keep the outline look, but maybe reduce the transformation coach part

where are u based... i get heaps of design work done for companies...

i like what you've done more and more.... now i'm not even sure about the reduction on the transformation coach.. i like it...

apologies for so many messages!!

no worries – I'm happy to tweak the text size.
and the logo does seem a bit "fine" at this small size but once it's bigger it really works well.

it could be that we do two versions.... i'm happy to supply whatever versions you need. i think it's important it works well smaller, for web etc. and then larger for shirts, any other gear you're branding, and signage.

I'll take a look at reducing the text a tad...see how it looks. Might balance slightly better with the JR logo.

I'm in Brisbane.

also, part of the reason behind the text size is that the weight/thickness of letters sits well with the thickness of the double lines on JR.

i'll do some fine tuning and clean up/polish. ha, sounds a bit like cut n' polish!

new #366 - smaller type around edge – compared to #362 earlier version.

i'm inclined to think #362 is slightly easier to read, and a bit more punchy but i do like the look of #366 too! up to you.

looks great, either way, i'll get both off you, should u win.

i like your style.

this is a good site, i went on this site because my usual designer has lost the edge.

i want to get a unique business card done for this soon too...

i do prefer the font size of transformation coaching on #366

great. i'm liking both for different reasons too.

all i can say (we're not supposed to promote other services during a contest) is that i'm sure anyone who wins would surely be able to design your card.

i'll check in a bit later in case you need to see anything...

Mike

i agree - #366 the type actually looks a lot more balanced with the jr and circle. liking that more and more.