JRLogo Design Contest

nice one indeed!

i am working on the tag line... struggling a bit with it. love the design and the fonts, fantastic.

can you show me how it will look if white logo on black, white logo on red,

cheers

hi again,
I think entry #242 would look better if:
the J was attached to the side of the circle that led up
the R was attached to the side of the circle that led down

how would it look also if the J had equal share of the circle in the middle? the R is wider?...

many thanks ,
JR

can you also try, having the 'transformation coach' stamped into the circle border, so transformation in the top border, coach in the bottom border, and the tag line beneath which says:

...makes you stronger

try that please, as you are indeed my favorite!!

Thank you for the feedback. I am currently working on it.

Here on #269 and #270 you have them on black and red. And on #267 you have the emblem style. All of them have the alignment fixed and more balance between the J and R.

Not sure about #268 the J looks like U in a way.
Let me know what you think.

#267 looks really good. this is very close to what i have been looking for...

i think there is some conflict between the style of the inner circle and the outer...mmm, not sure what it is...

perhaps the transformation coach part doesn't need to be as big. that font doesn't need to be as big... more subtle is good, however i love the idea...

the ...makes you stronger, looks good too!

i also agree the J with circle moving down looks the best...

no one is close to you yet.

well done!

can you tell me how the 2d inner circle look would come out on a tShirt?.... or will it be lost??

luv ur work!

i think part of the conflict might be that the colours/finish is different, outer circles and words 'transformation coach' can be darker to match inner circle colour.

just my novice assessment...

cheers,
look forward to your next submission...
thank you!

The thin cracks on inner circle will likely get lost on small size, though people would still get the idea.

I submitted a few variants along the font size change.

Oh and the color has changed too as you requested.

hi mate,
can you do #301 without the very outside border, so the words sit on the outside perimeter by themselves,

also, please change to: transformational coaching


can you also change entry #241 to 'transformational coaching' aswell

can you also try square for me please?

sorry, i know it is late notice!

Just a sec. I have been out the whole day.

There you have. If theres anything you need to see just let me know.

can you put tag line as 'fulfil your potential' on #380... it's very nice and has a high end feel

also, please change to back to Transformation Coach

Thanks!

i really like the number 1 design on my ranking, which is urs.

i am just concerned how it will translate onto a tshirt or a vehicle... as the 2D look is the hero, and will be lost once applied to screen print or vinyl

please share ur thoughts.

thanks