JRLogo Design Contest

HI Zelda,
love ur work.

can you remove tag line from entry #29 and put in circle.

can you also show how this logo would work as white on a black background

thanks

that looks cool! #69!!

nice work.

can you put a border around it like you did with your riverside house design?... if you think it will work that is...

Dear CH, i put the 3d circle around the logo. Also, I put the tagline just like you said.

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great work! love #110!

I am still assessing possible tags...so please forgive me!

the font you have used for the tag i think needs to be cleaner and more precise. ...if that makes sense??

can you also make the silver border a bit slimmer/finer.

can you also show me what that logo would look like, if it was all white, not other colour , with a black background. thank you!

Dear Ch, thanks for your comment. This is my revision with the thinner border and more precise tagline.

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This is the B/W version.

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great.

new tag as: transformation coach

i love what you've done so far...

do you have time or the desire to have a go at something that looks worn, a bit cracked like some of my other favs?

cheers

.. should the J be moved a little more into the centre to stand out more? often i have trouble seeing the J...

??

Dear CH, thank you for the fast feedback. Well, I think I'm submitting my 3d version before I look for something new ideas that you suggest like "crack". Feel free to comment on this. :)

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Halo CH, these are my new entry. Feel free to comment. Thank you

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i like #167, #168, #169...

i enjoy the round free stroke... I think that the design being flat and not 3d translates better onto tshirt etc. I have decided for now i will stick with tag line receive, believe, achieve

I have 2 concerns:, 1) that the inner design is too clean now and doesn't quite fit with freehand stroke,
2) that the J should be moved a touch to centre, to make the J stand out, and be clearer

love your work!

Dear CH, thanks for your feedback. This is the J in the center version. Feel free to ask if you want me to add some colors... Cheers.

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more clearer J :)

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hi Zelda,
I think your original position of the J was better...sorry!

i would like you to win this contest, but I currently have another fav no.1....

help

j

It's ok for me. I believe that's the best so far. Well, I will give you some other changes for the logo later. Need to look for inspiration now... :)
Cheers...

Dear CH, please feedback for #233 and #234. Thank you

hi Zelda,
not really a fan of the latest ones..sorry!

i'm asking designers to freestyle now, with their own style....

thanks Zelda, cute photo!!

Thank you for the feedback so I know what to do :) Cheers.

like the idea,
don't like the JR font though...