Joy Lorraine CosmeticsLogo Design Contest

Like the block style lettering, but do not like that the "J" in Joy is cut short. Also, the tag line should read "To Enhance The Beauty of Women Of Color Everywhere". Overall the placement is good. However, the "JL" interlaced design which was submitted is missing. The colors are beautiful.

The same is true for this one as well. Like the block style lettering, but do not like that the "J" in Joy is cut short. Also, the tag line should read "To Enhance The Beauty of Women Of Color Everywhere". Overall the placement is good. However, the "JL" interlaced design which was submitted is missing. The colors are beautiful.

Do not like the fonts here. Block style lettering would definitely work best. The "JL" interface design is closer to what I submitted. Tag line should read "To Enhance The Beauty Of Women Of Color Everywhere". The colors are beautiful.

Dear Joy410

Many thanks for your comment, here i submit new entry #7 #8 #9 #10 for new idea for your logo, make pictorial for word "JL: and put flower art inside for make more beauty in logo, feel free for other feedback.

kindly regard
ketut

I really like the block style on this. However, the interlace "JL" is what I'm having a problem with. I think if you look at the "JL" in the oval circle I uploaded, you will get a better idea of what I'm looking for. Also, a word is being left out in the tag line. Tag line should read "To Enhance The Beauty Of Women Of Color Everywhere". I would like to see the correct tag line in there. Also, let's see some in black only even though the color here is beautiful.

#1 does not move me at all. Do not really like the script.

Thanks for your feedback sir, i fix it now :)

#11 Not happy the the "JL" interlace design. Please refer to the JLC Logo that was submitted under Contest Attachment. My submitted interlaced "JL" design must be used in your design.

#12 Not happy the the "JL" interlace design. Please refer to the JLC Logo that was submitted under Contest Attachment. My submitted interlaced "JL" design must be used in your design. Also, please look at my updated brief for the correct Slogan.

update :)

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#16 Love the design BUT PLEASE USE THE LOGO I SENT AT THE BEGINNING OF THE CONTEST.

update :) at entry #21 #22 #23, feel free for other feedback

kindly regard
ketut

#21, #22, #23. I really love your designs but you MUST USE THE LOGO I SENT IN AT THE BEGINNING OF THE CONTEST.

#21, #22, #23. The "J L" interlaced logo is what you must use. It was done using Flemish Script II fonts.

update :)

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#30. Love the fonts, and is by far one of the best. Would like to see again but with #22 layout. Would also like to see it without the red in the logo.

#22. Would like to see this same layout using the updated logo, and the fonts in #30. Also, would like to remove the red from the logo.

thanks for your feedback sir, please see my new entry at #47 #48 #49 #50 #51 #52 and also submit logo on black and white view, so it more easier for printing :), feel free for other feedback

kindly regard
ketut

#51. Love the black and white Logo.

#50. Beautiful and almost done. Make logo like #51.

#48. Very nice and almost done. Remove red color from logo and let's see in black and white.

update entry #53 #54 #55 base on your last feedback :)

kindly regard
ketut

#55. This is perfect, but I only wanted you to remove the red in the logo ONLY. PLEASE PUT THE RED BACK IN THE SLOGAN "To Enhance The Beauty Of Women Of Color Everywhere".

update :)

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#85. The red is back in the slogan but then you change the color of the red???