I've reviewed your portfolio and like the depth and colors you've used, this one doesn't seem to have the same "flavor" I see how you've wrapped the text with the diamond. I like the concept, my problem with it is that when the images is small it makes the text harder to read.
Could you design something that had more of a "bug" to the left or top of the text some sort of abstract diamond or something like that. Or the "O" in Joslins as the icon or something.
Can you do one similar to #24 where there are 2 lines in the the middle slightly off center to show the cut and depth of the diamond? I'd also like to see some color/gradients in the main Joslins text