Jimmy StarLogo Design Contest

i like the style very much but here in the US it would become like a sign on a gravestone .....
the typewriting is very nice and the look is cool but could you try to keep the touch of "in Memory" .....he died 2014 ..... away ???? hope you catch what i am thinking .......

Hi Pinkophant88
Thank you for your feedback:) would you like me to change the style?
also please explain me more about it : "could you try to keep the touch of "in Memory" .....he died 2014 ..... away ????" Do you want to add those wording on the logo?

Thank you at advance
Kindest Regards
Medi

no the style of writing is very cool....

the picture is my issue i tried to explain that the style of how the picture is presented

feels like........

- he is dead
- in memory (gravestone) you got it ???

Jimmy is allive and feels good ;-) an he is a real bbq chef

you need to change the look a like from the picture ......

I see, Thank you for reply me:) will submit update shortly

Please check update: #52 #53 #54 #55

ok i got it ... may be i explain it wrong .... please try to work without the frame around the picture and without the leaf..... i think this gives the feeling of mourning and grief

in the end of the day bbq is something very traditional in the USA and its a kind of feeling and lifestyle

Can you edit please #55 and remove the fire flames under his portrait. Thank you!

No problem, please check #72 #73 :)

also #74 #75

Thanks for the changes. I'll make a decision later the day.

Thank you!

welcome:)
and i am still open for more revisions.