Love the way #16 is turning out, especially the globe attached to the "J". The font color needs to be a richer purple (darker), such as the one used in #14.
Would like to see a more elegant type of font...maybe something like the one used in #12.
Looking great! When I enlarge the picture of Entry #36, it looks like the trail of the plane is jagged (rough...not clean lines). Also, could we try to make the lettering JET a bit darker/bolder so you have a lighter globe, dark JET and then the a deeper purple for Cruiser - nice contrast.
In regards to the ship, it seems everyone is going with generic designs. If you can come up with an option that has the ship attached to the "R", but something simple and elegant - drop maybe a bit of the detail of the ship. I still want it looking like a ship, not a boat. Something similar to the ship in the logo of Destination Croisieres by linggayoni17.
In regards to the overall size, can you enlarge it slightly, similar to Entry #35?
hi there.. here's another update. I tried to simplified the ship, hopefully it suit with you.
the jagged you see is actually i did it on purpose. So the plane trail looks cut the font and leave trail. but anyway I cut them loose on my latest design.
also there some color change.. and maybe another color experiment in next submission
Thanks for the update! The ship is now too big and too detailed, so let's revert back to the size of the ship on Entry #36. Definitely do not want the height of the ship being higher than the letter R, as otherwise, it looks too busy with the airplane flying right above it.
I still prefer to have more of a simple hand stroke ship design such as in the logo of Destination Croisieres by linggayoni17.
Please focus on tweaking Entry #36, not the others.
Working on #69, the ship needs to have it base at the same level as the bottom of the letter R. You seem to have done that in Entry #71 and like that it touches the R and expands from the letter.
In regards to the ship, it is the correct style but still a bit busy. Somehow, if a line can be dropped from it, it will look a bit cleaner.
The Jetstream should also be a straight line.
As far as fonts, like the one in Entry #63, Entry #44 and #46 to give you an idea.
Now just to tweak the color a bit. Love the color combo that they used on this "Black Book Travel" by a.design and One Bar & Lounge by graphixspehere.
#76 looks great!!!! We are definitely going in the right direction in regards to the font style! I did not like the others that you proposed. Love the Black/Gold combo with the fading as well. Can the gold be a bit more gold/metallic/richer?
In regards to the ship, can the line from the R and the base of the ship be straight/horizontal? It doesn't seem clean/connected at the moment. Also, the lines of the different decks of the ship seem a bit jagged so concerned once the image is blown up, that this would not show well?
Another suggestion...if the plane was just slightly bigger, so it looks in proportion to the ship.
Thanks for all the updates! Looking great and leaning towards #106!
Noticed that the GLOBE is now smaller than before so please increase that so it is larger than the letter "J" and comes down into the J - similar to how it was in Entry #71. The globe should start coming out of the bottom of the letter J smoothly.
If possible, can the ship lines be a bit cleaner/crisper. When I enlarge the picture, it still looks like it was pasted there with slightly jagged lines?
One final request, what about switching the globe to a modern design such as in Entry #29 by kib647? That might put it all together as nice modern logo?
I think that should cover it and hopefully we can finalize something in the next 24 hours. Many thanks!
Hi There. Glad you like it. I'll make another tweak soon.
About globe. I'll try to make a modern globe for you. But maybe different and not similar with design you mention. Cause we are not allowed to use other designer design. Just don't wanna get in some trouble. :)
Thanks for the clarification regarding the GLOBE and completely understand. Please note that I was not asking you to copy, only to get an idea from it. I like that modern style/look and I think it will match really well with the plane/ship style so it will be nicely balanced!
Yup I get it :). Globe is common item in this contest. So I just have to make a different kind of globe. Maybe same type but different enough. That's it. Will give u update soon.
Thanks for the updates! When I enlarge the SHIP on Entry #111, the lines still don't seem that clean/crisp--they still look a bit jagged/rough. I like the design of the ship so no need to change that, just somehow make the lines smoother.
In regards to the GLOBE, that one is too busy, too standard looking for my style. I prefer the style in Entry #29 by big647, which I know you can't copy. If you can do something similar to that, it would be perfect!
[updates] another globe design... hope this will work for you. fyi. we can make this globe more perfect even after contest finished if you wish...
I also give you bigger size of the ship. the jagged/rough you see is actually caused by the line is not a straight line. It has a little curve. so once it exported to Jpg, the line looks jagged. but if you see the original file. all is good. Vector file is also wont give rough line even its re-size couple times than it original. But if you still think thats not good enough, I'll make it more straight for you :)
Many thanks for ALL the updates and the quick turnaround time! In regards to your logo design, I have a little bit more tweaking if possible?
For the GLOBE, if it can be a bit lighter in color (more gray rather than black) PLUS we need to make sure the bottom runs smoothly with the letter “J”. When I enlarge it, it looks like it is slightly lower than the J so if it can be raised just a bit, that would be perfect.
Thank you for the larger version of the SHIP. I still see very minimal jagged lines but trust that you have that covered. It is probably the way I see it on my monitor / laptop.
Two final requests…
Can we somehow implement a more METALLIC GOLD effect on the fading of “Cruiser”? Again, similar to metallic feeling as in the design of One Bar & Lounge by graphixspehere, although they used silver and we want gold.
As I look more at the other entries, the ONLY thing that pops to my mind that I do NOT like in this logo, is the FONT STYLE. Is there any way of using something crisp modern like in Entry #109? I actually love the way that looks, and would prefer the lettering not be in italics or at an angle.
In regards to the final image files, what format are they provided? I assume JPEG? Also are you able to provide it as an Adobe Illustrator CS2 file?
Out of curiosity, where are you in Indonesia? I used to have 5 offices there for the cruise ship business. They still exist but no longer involved.
Great thanks! Signing off now so will be back online in about 8+ hours. And yes, had the office in Jakarta and it still exists now but just not involved with that company anymore.
Final updates! I am actually interested in BOTH designs on my ranking so need to figure that out by tomorrow.
AIRPLANE STREAM - if you can start it from the J (but not cutting into the J). The letter J should be full/complete.
AIRPLANE - prefer that it is more GOLD than BLACK.
COLOR - If you can do the GOLD METALLIC fading look very similar to Entry #137. That color scheme is perfect!
Since the letters/characters are NO longer in italics, can you please adjust the SHIP so it is coming off of the R. Therefore you won't see the angle and the gap between the R and the ship. Ship coloring seems to be fine.
Got to know you like it. I'm not home right now. Will give you update soon after I get back home :)
Hope the meeting will pick me as winner. Hehehe
FYI. Before contest finished. We're not allowed to give any contact detail to CH. that could make others think there's a back door deal. If you let say pick me as a winner. The contest than end. Then there will be a link that I can upload all files you need , all variation and raw files. You can download them and once you like what I send you. Than you can accept those files and I will get pay.we can always have communication before and after you accept the logo files.
After contest end. But you also want to buy others designer logo (not the one you pick as the winner). Than you can give them private message to buy the logo and raw files you want.
My team noticed that the letter J is cut at the bottom from the jetstream. Can you please redo with the complete letter being present. The Jetstream can start from the J but should not in any way cut in to it.
Perfect! :-) I will revert tomorrow. Although the team will make the final decision, I may want to have BOTH logos - yours as well as the other leading entry. How can we manage that option? Can you email me at Niklas jetcruiser Com
My team has chosen Entry #137 however we still want yours as well. :-) Once the contest is finished, please email me so we can sort that all out. Thanks again for everything. This was a lot of fun and such a great website.