Thanks for your submissions! I think #52 is going to be the runner here. I really like what's going on. We have a couple requests for this one, if you wouldn't mind.
1. There seems to be a bit too much space between JET and Financial - could you make the spacing between the two strokes/paths thinner? Also maybe use thinner strokes for the path itself. I really like how it obscures the text though. Sharp look 2. The "Mortgage & Credit Management" is a little difficult to read. Any way to make this more prominent, without it taking over the piece? 3. Could we get a couple revisions with the above changes, experimenting with some different color? We like what you have going on with this one, but would like to see what a couple other color schemes would look like.
Nice revision on #67. Thanks for the changes, they look great. The tagline is much easier to read. I enjoy the overall elegance of it, with a forward-thinking feel.
Just a few revisions that jump out - the letters are a little too blocked out now - I really liked the look of #52 in that regard. Could you reduce the width between the two strokes, and bring the arrow/jet a little closer to the body text?
Thanks a ton Jason. I really, really like your work on this one. The more I look at it the more I like it.
Re: #70 - YES! The height of the jet is perfect. I think the stroke width is good.
Kind of minor tweaks here, taking what I like from all your designs:
1. Use original color scheme from #67. Thanks for playing w/different colors for me, helps me see how much I like the first one. If the strokes are too thin now (ala #70) to show the gradient well, I am comfortable with the thickness of #67.
2. For "Mortgage & Credit Management", I prefer the lettering from #73 - much easier to read.
3. Height of the jet in #70 is perfect
4. I feel like the T and the F aren't getting the kind of play they were in #52; it's too covered by the swoosh. Could you make a mix of the letter coverage from #52, and the "flight paths" from #70? I'll do my best to elaborate:
What I'm seeing in my head is a combo of the right swoosh starting where it does in #70, and coming up to cover just the edge of the F as in #52. Then the left swoosh as it is in #52, covering less of the T; with the whitespace decreased between the swooshes (similar width as #73). If this affects the arcs too much, you may space out the "JET" and "Financial" just a smidge to make it optimal. I trust your judgement in this.
I hope that makes sense. Apologies for my verbosity.
Your design is _extremely_ pleasing to the eye. Thank you for your work on this. I thought I had decided on my #1, but you coming into this race has really shaken things up in my head. This design is fantastic!