You have an extremely aggressive and impressive design that I believe will go far.
It is so good I am limiting my requests to letter tweaks and color shifts.
1) The letter J "goes back up" I would like it to not do that. Change J so that the J looks like a backwards L with more rounding at the corner. I can draw if there is confusion.
2) Same with the letter C. Please make it so the letter C looks like half a square with rounded edges.
3) Letter L cut off the corner
4) Add whitespace so the flight path is not touching the "ball"
After the above changes, please upload a version where instead of a ball it is a shape of the State of Michigan. I very much like your ball but I would like to see Michigan as well. Also, the flight path with no plane attached please delete.
Thank you I love this so much. Let me say the changes another way, I think there was confusion...
Please change #36... 1) Plane yes 2) Plane has a flight path. 3) The other flight path please delete, no more "X" looking 4) Try RGB 61-102-49 instead of blue 5) Cut off part of J just like for L, symmetry, balance. 6) Michigan shape has gentle gradient.