#11 I like the concept, perhaps just a bit less broad with the house? Please try a less formal font (sans serif?) and try the slogan in a script font. I do like the dropped "J". thanks!
#23 is my fave so far. Font is better but not perfect. I definitely like "and associates" narrower like this, with the lines. Please try the "to us, buisness is personal" in a simple script font - thanks!