Can we also try doing a version with an adjusted J . We are still getting feedback that it looks like a T or an F and we need it to be clear that it is a J. I want to keep this style of font, but make the J clear. Thoughts?
Hi!! Can we nudge the subtitle down, like a half-space so it's not crowding the S in Janistyle and so the leaf I circled is pointing at the S in Staging? This should be a very small adjustment
It looks like we can still work here to make adjustments before I officially select you as the winner. Let's get it a little closer using this platform and then I will make you the winner.
I just uploaded a new one with the changes on the berry/s
Let me continue to work on the 'J' I may have to recreate a new 'J'. I don't mind doing that, I want it to be perfect. Might now have it done before the contest ends, but that will not make any difference, in other words, your final product will be a 'J' that you are happy with.
like the green and gold changes. Can you please make the berry I circled the darker gold and the one I put a line through the lighter gold?
Can we also do anything else with the J to make it look less like a cursive F?
#284 I've made some edits to this one per your latest comments, using a darker green (eucalyptus) and adding the deeper gold back to some of the elements. I've also dropped the 'J' down just a bit so that it does not attach as high on the 'a'.
I am working on these things now per your comments:
**The J is looking a bit like a cursive F, so we want to attach it to the "a" in a different place (hard to explain)
we want to move the branch out even more, specifically up and out on the left side of the J
We want to make the darker shades of green darker, so they look more like real Eucalyptise color
We want to bring the darker gold back into most of the berries with only a few slightly lighter
Even if every detail is not exactly right when you award, I have plenty of time to make those little changes prior to sending you the final files. I can also share my personal email so that you can reach me if you have questions or need adjustments to the design. Your feedback is very helpful.
Ok! The contest ends in 3 hours. I think you are on EST? I'm on PST. I have a 1pm PST meeting, so we will need to talk before that. This is the logo we want to select, but still need to make adjustments. I can invite you to a zoom meeting and you can share your screen without having to use a camera. This way you can show different shades of green and move the greenery real-time and I can say, "a little more" or "a little to the left" and we can wrap up those details.
The J is looking a bit like a cursive F, so we want to attach it to the "a" in a different place (hard to explain)
we want to move the branch out even more, specifically up and out on the left side of the J
We want to make the darker shades of green darker, so they look more like real Eucalyptise color
We want to bring the darker gold back into most of the berries with only a few slightly lighter
Let me know when you can connect.
Thank you!
I'm away from my design desk for a few hours, and you will laugh, but I have never done Zoom! I am not sure my PC even has a camera. : / I'll touch base with you as soon as I return and see if we can figure something out.
This is looking great!! Any way we can hop on a zoom to work on final details real-time with screen sharing?
A few changes to the J and colors and the position of the branch. It would be really easy if we did over zoom. LMK
#282 I've darkened a few leaves and lightened up a few of the gold areas, also scooted the tagline over just a bit to the left so that it is more centered and moved the floral graphic up and away from the top of the J.
Can you make the same changes here as I just requested in design #281 and work on this font in a few places to eliminate the loop on the "t" and can you maybe change the "J" to a more cursive instead of print/cursive. We wantto be sure the logo is classy and artistic. Hope this helps, bt let me know if you need more clarification.
Thank you for all your precise feedback! It takes a lot of the guesswork out of the equation for me.
Once you choose a winner you can still work together during the handing over of the final files. If my design is chosen I’ll make sure every little detail is perfect, color, font, layout etc. I’m calling it a night but will be back at it tomorrow.
This is awesome Janis!! The font is right on point. Really like the lighter weight. We are sooo close. A feew things as we get down to the wire on time.
1) can you move th branch up a little away from the J so it has a little breathing room
2) can you take the gold a shade lighter, but I really like it. Maybe only a few of them lighter to show some different shades of the gold
3) we want a little variance, or to see if it looks good, i nthe green. I think it's all one color right now? just a few leaves with a little darker, but slight changes
4) can we center the subtitle between the bottom of the J and Y, so it will come to the left a little. We like keeping this shade of gold for the dots between the subtitle words
We have less than 22 hours left in the competition. When that time is up, I am assuming all changes need to be final. Is that your understanding?
#280 This font paired with latest floral graphic. Unfortunately this font only comes in this weight, not any lighter, however, given a little more time, I could recreate the font in a lighter weight. I'll work on that this afternoon.
We are really liking this version!! Can you play with the colors on the vine, like maybe make the yellow a little more gold and darken up the dots between the subtitle so we can see them more. Also want a version with the font you used on design 277, but a slightly less bold version. We are leaning toward this design and want to start getting into details.
we are actually liking this one too. Can you make it a partial circle around the J a little and make the subtitle like the other ones in your other designs?
#275 This one has the same flower and tagline as the first ranked design. I am working on a new flower where the stem is not quite as straight and will send over shortly.
Can you update this one to include the changes we made to the flower and tag line in #260? Want an alternate font to compare with this flower.
Can you also provide another option where this flower has a little more curve to it instead of straight? If we like the updated flower, then
I would want to apply it to #260 as well
like this!! Can we nudge the subtitle a little closer to the y? I like the tagline a little less bold, but maybe split the difference between this one and what you did for #258. Do you think it's legible given the size?
Can you try an updated version of design #218 that has the subtitle a little more spread out and larger, like in design #251? Also, wondering if we can try a pop of gold in the center of one of the flowers, but not sure this will look good.
#218 Good morning,
Here's a little color added to this one. I have an appt. that will take me away from my design desk this morning, but will work on other options for you as soon as I return!
Thank you again for your feedback!
Kind regards,
Janis
#138 I've used softer tones of blue on the flower and darkest blue on the dots, with gold in center of flower. Again, I will continue to work on improving all elements of the design, thank you!
awesome. Can you add color to the dots in between the subtitle words and maybe play with putting a little pop of color on part of the flower. it will need to print well and show up. Janis is really liking what you are doing so far.
#130 I cleaned up the flowers and added just a bit more to them. Again, I'll continue to work on improving my design throughout the weekend. I haven't found a font a love more than this one, but I will continue to look.
I like this logo concept, but wondering if we can play with some of the other fonts you did that I like and we need to figure out how to incorporate the flower in a different way. Bring your ideas!!
Thank you so much for these initial designs. Love that your name is also Janis! I started to share some comments. Excited to see what comes next. Thank you!
#15 Hi!
I am so excited about this contest! Here's my first design for your consideration. I will explore all of my fonts and also different flower layouts so I can bring many other options to the gallery. This type of logo design is my favorite, love drawing flowers and my name is Janis. : )
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Let me continue to work on the 'J' I may have to recreate a new 'J'. I don't mind doing that, I want it to be perfect. Might now have it done before the contest ends, but that will not make any difference, in other words, your final product will be a 'J' that you are happy with.
Can we also do anything else with the J to make it look less like a cursive F?
**The J is looking a bit like a cursive F, so we want to attach it to the "a" in a different place (hard to explain)
we want to move the branch out even more, specifically up and out on the left side of the J
We want to make the darker shades of green darker, so they look more like real Eucalyptise color
We want to bring the darker gold back into most of the berries with only a few slightly lighter
The J is looking a bit like a cursive F, so we want to attach it to the "a" in a different place (hard to explain)
we want to move the branch out even more, specifically up and out on the left side of the J
We want to make the darker shades of green darker, so they look more like real Eucalyptise color
We want to bring the darker gold back into most of the berries with only a few slightly lighter
Let me know when you can connect.
Thank you!
A few changes to the J and colors and the position of the branch. It would be really easy if we did over zoom. LMK
Once you choose a winner you can still work together during the handing over of the final files. If my design is chosen I’ll make sure every little detail is perfect, color, font, layout etc. I’m calling it a night but will be back at it tomorrow.
1) can you move th branch up a little away from the J so it has a little breathing room
2) can you take the gold a shade lighter, but I really like it. Maybe only a few of them lighter to show some different shades of the gold
3) we want a little variance, or to see if it looks good, i nthe green. I think it's all one color right now? just a few leaves with a little darker, but slight changes
4) can we center the subtitle between the bottom of the J and Y, so it will come to the left a little. We like keeping this shade of gold for the dots between the subtitle words
We have less than 22 hours left in the competition. When that time is up, I am assuming all changes need to be final. Is that your understanding?
Janis
Meeting with Janis to review and provide more feedback soon
Can you also provide another option where this flower has a little more curve to it instead of straight? If we like the updated flower, then
I would want to apply it to #260 as well
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Here's a little color added to this one. I have an appt. that will take me away from my design desk this morning, but will work on other options for you as soon as I return!
Thank you again for your feedback!
Kind regards,
Janis
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I am so excited about this contest! Here's my first design for your consideration. I will explore all of my fonts and also different flower layouts so I can bring many other options to the gallery. This type of logo design is my favorite, love drawing flowers and my name is Janis. : )