Entry #26:I'm not sold on the grey lettering. My color preferences are the red/rust and brown/beige tones. I'm not sure if I want a white background either. I like the feel of your work. It's crisp and clean. Keep working on everything below the red line.
I've now had an opportunity to look at more of your portfolio. Please keep working with entry # 26 but also I like the way you use symbols and initials. Perhaps you can also create something like that. I'd even be interested to see something with the house being very abstract or no house at all.