Jake Thompson HairLogo Design Contest

my submission for your company logo
I hope you like :)

I like the font Denir & i like the fading of the light grey's on my name! Only the hair seems like different sizes of 'S's, if we could make it look more organic? And gradually fade into nothing on the top right! Also Go to my website and check out how i see hair & style, jakethompsonhair.com
Good Luck

hi Jake, thank you for your feedback
here's the revision of your logo with more organic "hair"
I'm still refining the shape of the hair in order to make it look more surreal

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detailed view of the hair

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refined version

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detail on hair

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Hey Denir, love the revised hair #67&68 definitely more organic. Do you think you could make the hair fly away more on the "R" part? Loving your style Denir! Keep up the great work!

Hi Jake, thanks for the rank...I'm glad you love it :D
I'll work on the revision and submit the updates soon

thx
-Denir-

updates

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detail

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Hey denir, i would like you to keep the consistency of the squiggly lines across the "hair" part, like on entry 67, could you extend it on the top right, like 74 "but a little longer"? I want it to flow like hair would in the wind eventually melting into nothing.

Good luck

I'll work on the hair based on your request Jake, thanks again for the rank :)

Hi Jake,
I hope one of these design (#97, #98, #99, #100) represent what you're looking for :)

Thank you
-Denir-