I like both of these alot. #56 may be difficult to have the same affect on a uniform/shirt. I like the banner used in #56. Do you think you can come up with something without the shield. Also see what you come up with if you add the same banner/ribbon element to #57, without making it to busy of course. Great work. We are also trying to get the contest extended. Please keep the ideas rolling.
One more suggestion. Where the name of the school is spelled out. Can you make that font more like times roman (or with a little more style serif or san serif, i think, not sure). Thanks