J's MaintenanceLogo Design Contest

Ohhh. I like! Looks shiny clean. Thank you!

Hi,

Thank you.
Don't hesitate to ask for more revision.

Best,
BL-Tami

Please read the comments I just added to the contest brief.
Thank you!
Debra

Hi Debra,

Sure, I will come up with the revision and new design.

#158 on- I prefer your simple approach. These new images are too busy. Thank you for keeping on!

#173 - I like the look, but to me it looks like a tear drop

#169 - please do this using the leaf in the s, like it is, and an actual apostrophe rather than the leaf between the J and the s.

will provide the revision #169 immediately

I'm sorry to say that I just don't think this path is leading us in the right direction. I still prefer your first, simpler designs. :-) Thank you!

185-5 are too character-y. Still, attractive!

#171
WHAT’S WORKING:
• Simple, clean design.
• Clean read on ‘Maintenance’ text.
• Clean font usage.
WHAT’S NOT WORKING:
• Glows on the corners look forced.
• ‘Since’ text disappears.
• Italic font ok, but would try non italic.
ADJUSTMENTS NEEDED:
• Position leaf up and to the right some, seems too jammed down into the letter forms.
• Remove the leaf inside the ‘S’. Looks forced.
• Try non italic on the ‘Maintenance’ text.
• Make the ‘Since’ text legible. Make sure it works when logo mark goes small.
• Is that the best position for the ‘Since’ text? Maybe centered?
• Fix the radiuses on the corners, between the outer outline and the inner box with radiused corners. All points should
offset paths, rather than look like the radiused boxes were scaled down or up.
• What would this look like in grey scale or black and white?

Hi Debra,

Sure, I will provide the revision for you. But now this contest is currently in judging mode.
Only the 1st ranked designer will be able to submit entries.
You can put me (my design) in the first rank so I can submit the revision. You can change anytime for the first rank you like.

Hope this may help.

Best,
BL-Tami

Did you respond?

#159
May we see this with a regular s (delete the leaf), regular, non italicized Maintenance, since 1969 larger

#171 use richer green to provide more contrast

#161 - delete leaf in s, make s a tiny bit larger

I'm sorry for late response, i have trouble with my internet connection (down connection).
Yes I will provide the revision right now.

update.
the revision.
#198
#199
#200
#201
#202
#203
#204
#205
#206

OPTION 4 - #200
WHAT’S WORKING:
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Simple, clean design.
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Clean read on ‘Maintenance’ text.
•
Clean font usage. Better read with no italic.
•
Better lines and borders.
•
Gradient is ok.
WHAT’S NOT WORKING:
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The leaf is tiny and disappearing.
• ‘since’ should be capitalized. Still seems a little small.
ADJUSTMENTS NEEDED:
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Go back to the size of the leaf being used as an apostrophe (#171). The point should be down versus up. Position it a
little more up and above the letter ‘s’.
•
Capitalize ‘SINCE’. Increase font size 5%.
•
Too many greens. Simplify the color pallet. Make the border the same color as the ‘Maintenance’ text.

Hi Debra,

Sure, I will provide the revision for you.

Only the 1st ranked designer will be able to submit entries.
You can put me (my design) in the first rank so I can submit the revision. You can change anytime for the first rank you like.

Best,
BL-Tami

Here you go! Thank you SO much!

update.
#231 resize the leaf and rotate, increase "SINCE" size 5% and capitelize, border color same with "Maintenance" color

new color scheme
#232
#233
#234

121 - please used a dark green, non italic and all caps for MAINTENANCE and add Since 1969

#232 - one color of the dark green please

Sure, will provide the revision right now

update.
#246, #247 dark green
#248, #249 darker green

#250, #251 centering text for "Since 1969"

awesome! thank you

update.
an option.
#252 shinny version from #248